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[AVTCORE] Comments on draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-01

Glen Zorn <gwz@net-zen.net> Tue, 17 May 2011 06:47 UTC

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Section 10 says "Geoff Hunt and Philip Arden wrote the initial draft for
this document".  That being the case, they should be listed as authors
or, at the very least, in a "Contributors" section; I much prefer the
former, since there is no lack of space on the front page.  In that same
vein, I think that Qin Wu should be listed as "Editor".

Also in Section 10:
s/Acknowledgement/Acknowledgments/
s/Drage,Dan/Drage, Dan/
s/Begen, Roni/Begen and Roni/
s/early version/early versions/

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