Re: [avtext] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 21 June 2017 12:46 UTC

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Subject: Re: [avtext] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05
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Roni, thanks for your review. Jonathan, thanks for addressing Roni’s comments. I have entered a No Objection ballot position on this document.

Alissa

> On Jun 1, 2017, at 2:53 AM, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2017-05-31
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-06-08
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> The document is ready with issues for a standard track RFC
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> 1. Can you specify both TTID and TLID in the same FCI.
> 2. What is the meaning of value 0 for TTID and TLID - TID or LID =0 in
> frame marking draft means base layer if there is scalability.
>     This relates to the previous question. 
> 3.  What would an FCI with both TTID and TLID equal 0 mean.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
> 
> 1. Section 3 "an Real-Time Transport Control Protocol" should be "a
> Real...".
> 2. In section 3 " [RFC5104](Section 3.5.1)" there is a link to section
> 3.5.1 but it does not work.
> 3. In section 3.2 "(see section Section 2.1)" section appears twice.
> 
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