Re: [babel] Last Call: <draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11.txt>, naming inconsistencies

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From: "STARK, BARBARA H" <bs7652@att.com>
To: 'Antonin Décimo' <antonin.decimo@gmail.com>, "'last-call@ietf.org'" <last-call@ietf.org>, "'draft-ietf-babel-information-model.all@ietf.org'" <draft-ietf-babel-information-model.all@ietf.org>, "'babel@ietf.org'" <babel@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Last Call: <draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11.txt>, naming inconsistencies
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Thank you Antonin, for helping me (in a private email exchange) identify more of these inconsistencies. This is the additional set we identified:

OLD
   } babel-mac-obj;
NEW
   } babel-mac-key-set-obj;

OLD
   babel-mac-default-apply:  A Boolean flag indicating whether this
      babel-mac instance is applied to all new babel-interface
NEW
   babel-mac-default-apply:  A Boolean flag indicating whether this
      object instance is applied to all new babel-interface

OLD
      including it in the babel-interface-mac-keys list.  If "false",
NEW
      including it in the babel-if-mac-key-sets list.  If "false",

OLD
   babel-dtls-default-apply:  A Boolean flag indicating whether this
      babel-dtls instance is applied to all new babel-interface
NEW
   babel-dtls-default-apply:  A Boolean flag indicating whether this
      object instance is applied to all new babel-interface

Barbara

> -----Original Message-----
> From: STARK, BARBARA H
> Sent: Monday, November 02, 2020 2:15 PM
> To: 'Antonin Décimo' <antonin.decimo@gmail.com>; 'last-call@ietf.org' <last-
> call@ietf.org>; 'draft-ietf-babel-information-model.all@ietf.org' <draft-ietf-
> babel-information-model.all@ietf.org>; 'babel@ietf.org' <babel@ietf.org>
> Subject: RE: [babel] Last Call: <draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11.txt>,
> naming inconsistencies
> 
> Hi Antonin,
> Thanks again. I see in this email that, in addition to the previous 2 errors
> related to mac-key-sets, you include corrections for Section 2:
> 
> -   +-- router-id
> -   +-- self-seqno
> 
> +   +-- babel-self-router-id
> +   +-- babel-self-seqno
> 
> I'll include these fixes in the next version.
> Thx,
> Barbara
> 
> > ---
> > Dear all,
> >
> > I’ve found some inconsistencies in the naming of some fields in the
> > Babel Information Model. I’ve already send mails about them; but I’m
> > afraid my mails might have fallen in limbo. The issue is minor.
> > Below is a patch for the fields.
> >
> > Best regards,
> >
> > Antonin
> >
> >
> >  draft-ietf-babel-information-model.md | 8 ++++----
> >  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/draft-ietf-babel-information-model.md b/draft-ietf-babel-
> > information-model.md
> > index 7990b7a..1588797 100644
> > --- a/draft-ietf-babel-information-model.md
> > +++ b/draft-ietf-babel-information-model.md
> > @@ -179,8 +179,8 @@ The Information Model is hierarchically structured
> as
> > follows:
> >  +-- babel-information
> >
> >     +-- babel-implementation-version
> >
> >     +-- babel-enable
> >
> > -   +-- router-id
> >
> > -   +-- self-seqno
> >
> > +   +-- babel-self-router-id
> >
> > +   +-- babel-self-seqno
> >
> >     +-- babel-metric-comp-algorithms
> >
> >     +-- babel-security-supported
> >
> >     +-- babel-mac-algorithms
> >
> > @@ -534,7 +534,7 @@ babel-mac-enable:
> >    An implementation MAY choose
> >
> >    to expose this parameter as read-only ("ro").
> >
> >
> >
> > -babel-if-mac-keys-sets:
> >
> > +babel-if-mac-key-sets:
> >
> >  : List of references to the babel-mac entries that apply to this
> >
> >    interface. When an interface instance is created, all babel-mac-key-sets
> >
> >    instances with babel-mac-default-apply "true" will be included
> >
> > @@ -828,7 +828,7 @@ babel-mac-default-apply:
> >    applied to all new babel-interface instances, by default.
> >
> >    If "true", this instance is applied to
> >
> >    new babel-interfaces instances at the time they are created, by including
> >
> > -  it in the babel-interface-mac-keys list.
> >
> > +  it in the babel-if-mac-key-sets list.
> >
> >    If "false", this instance is not applied to new babel-interfaces
> >
> >    instances when they are created.
> >
> >    An implementation MAY choose
> >
> > --
> > 2.29.1