Re: [babel] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09

[Mahesh Jethanandani <[e-mail]>]

Hi Stewart,

Thanks for reviewing the document. I have addressed your nits and will be available as part of -10 version of the draft.

Cheers.

> On May 4, 2021, at 10:39 AM, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2021-05-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-04-22
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: A well written text that is ready for publication. Just one note and a
> couple of minor nits.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> 5.  Acknowledgements
> Juliusz Chroboczek provided most of the example configurations for babel that
> are shown in the Appendix.
> 
> The Appendix seems seems quite substantive, I am surprised that Juliusz was not
> listed as an author.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 2.1.  Information Model
> 
> " attributes are marked a read-only objects in the information module"
> SB> s/marked a/marked as/
> 
> 2.3.  YANG Module
> "On other hand, for a"
> 
> SB> s/On other hand/On the other hand/
> 
> 

Mahesh Jethanandani
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