Re: [babel] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11: (with COMMENT)

"STARK, BARBARA H" <bs7652@att.com> Tue, 03 November 2020 23:10 UTC

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Thread-Topic: Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [babel] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Barry,
Thanks for your review. I'll make both of the changes you suggest.
Barbara

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> COMMENT:
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> Just a couple of minor comments here:
> 
> — Section 1.1 —
> Please use the exact BCP 14 boilerplate from RFC 8174.

I will change to use the exact BCP 14 boilerplate.

> — Section 1.2 —
> For “datetime”, I suggest adding “Section 5.6” to the reference to RFC 3339,
> to
> make the specific format easier to find.  And I think the use of 3339 in the
> definition of the type makes it a normative reference.

I will add Section 5.6 to the RFC 3339 reference.

> Similarly, the use of ISO.10646 to define “string” makes it normative.
> 
>