Re: [babel] Last Call: <draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09.txt> (YANG Data Model for Babel) to Proposed Standard

tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> Fri, 14 May 2021 10:20 UTC

Return-Path: <daedulus@btconnect.com>
X-Original-To: babel@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: babel@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C8F703A2D7D; Fri, 14 May 2021 03:20:15 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.901
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.901 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, MSGID_FROM_MTA_HEADER=0.001, NICE_REPLY_A=-0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H2=-0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=btconnect.onmicrosoft.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id apCHAE2qbogB; Fri, 14 May 2021 03:20:10 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from EUR01-HE1-obe.outbound.protection.outlook.com (mail-eopbgr130137.outbound.protection.outlook.com [40.107.13.137]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 465933A2D7A; Fri, 14 May 2021 03:20:10 -0700 (PDT)
ARC-Seal: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; s=arcselector9901; d=microsoft.com; cv=none; b=Ts2Wqn7cOReA8jWuwH+MC+/8TnBzCv8mKkxLLZozWv4ikB5Cb4cwU4lLVyAeV1p6HWy+dgnqXSzjsKy63e4QgmiVE7hOhRaaIVgx361jTfSOKvDhKNT9m/dyZ0omuTAxnaaPMHGFa3lwy7NaRVcjZY5ududgBRl51PR32wfBGDzvn96e8bF6HXIWJMlM8tmlmHiP7BWNAKthiDB+UPH76mkjYT+UXomfMZ2kD1JQ0dWeAxnKpal5qylJpsNeSJzmDfMTu+4CsK5MNpjiIBxy87EkEoTGClJggchDw0hce3b2sOYcYK3MZC/4Ap8qkICVPQRdu+mm6tVGNN6ze7koxg==
ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=microsoft.com; s=arcselector9901; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-SenderADCheck; bh=MmGxjyEza4VPBIkltQsVlT1xrBdRloHkVRt36e1Tmg0=; b=MnT977gR6KJm5Cz0Y2FrGQ4AEMP9p51xr2RUnKV4EtlQvNtkcL0eAG6C+A9OMOaxCdhPbVBrQjoXzNTcue5Qh+v/TAjvTLx+VHZLSO+BuZwcecvMdeewwkxU4Ta08quyuhJ2ifBfJ2oR3vmswCaFXCPchRT/6DbvkS5rfq+IJOITjEzJD7OgcRJwUfsJ6Q6dXNA2WCMqZP3JTiaGFI0KIEMnFFrRA2+TQIXwwhZvkjG5mtY8krzycPuPz5kxzQlgPhMdGzaFwPWBilOmIse7l0ncikcS2sfoHQVImo9ujd+JxALsd7CZvCE3BwRgr7iqYK4WUUxllM8iQyNc4l0EOA==
ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx.microsoft.com 1; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=btconnect.com; dmarc=pass action=none header.from=btconnect.com; dkim=pass header.d=btconnect.com; arc=none
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=btconnect.onmicrosoft.com; s=selector2-btconnect-onmicrosoft-com; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-SenderADCheck; bh=MmGxjyEza4VPBIkltQsVlT1xrBdRloHkVRt36e1Tmg0=; b=YdJgoqedYuLnQzuwuv2CczYufCN7A2VaJGfTHiq+2dtMwmccRQ/RiM3kbW3nOoqvZlQGDdbKEg992ptuT5EysTdW2w1nf2fSzuqTeWl4vC6k3z+ocRWO0PNH7joWkW00bWIRTAK9mzl9/d3EadjxVJBTqkMZtNowg06+AMItiqg=
Authentication-Results: ietf.org; dkim=none (message not signed) header.d=none;ietf.org; dmarc=none action=none header.from=btconnect.com;
Received: from VI1PR07MB6704.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com (2603:10a6:800:18b::8) by VI1PR07MB3517.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com (2603:10a6:802:22::32) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.20.4129.23; Fri, 14 May 2021 10:20:07 +0000
Received: from VI1PR07MB6704.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::d461:48ec:82a3:1877]) by VI1PR07MB6704.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::d461:48ec:82a3:1877%9]) with mapi id 15.20.4150.011; Fri, 14 May 2021 10:20:07 +0000
To: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
References: <161788580040.14525.8607775335520195175@ietfa.amsl.com> <607406F2.70500@btconnect.com> <BAD13FB1-2787-4DFF-ACD5-BB259FA0D43C@gmail.com>
Cc: last-call@ietf.org, babel-chairs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-babel-yang-model@ietf.org, babel@ietf.org
From: tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com>
Message-ID: <609E4ED3.5010101@btconnect.com>
Date: Fri, 14 May 2021 11:20:03 +0100
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 5.1; rv:38.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/38.5.0
In-Reply-To: <BAD13FB1-2787-4DFF-ACD5-BB259FA0D43C@gmail.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252; format=flowed
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
X-Originating-IP: [86.143.250.49]
X-ClientProxiedBy: LO2P123CA0012.GBRP123.PROD.OUTLOOK.COM (2603:10a6:600:a6::24) To VI1PR07MB6704.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com (2603:10a6:800:18b::8)
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-MS-Exchange-MessageSentRepresentingType: 1
Received: from [192.168.1.65] (86.143.250.49) by LO2P123CA0012.GBRP123.PROD.OUTLOOK.COM (2603:10a6:600:a6::24) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_128_GCM_SHA256) id 15.20.4108.25 via Frontend Transport; Fri, 14 May 2021 10:20:06 +0000
X-MS-PublicTrafficType: Email
X-MS-Office365-Filtering-Correlation-Id: 9c0b6a55-d1e8-4312-5f8a-08d916c1d8ae
X-MS-TrafficTypeDiagnostic: VI1PR07MB3517:
X-Microsoft-Antispam-PRVS: <VI1PR07MB3517D10FBE94649E1A06A01FC6509@VI1PR07MB3517.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com>
X-MS-Oob-TLC-OOBClassifiers: OLM:8882;
X-MS-Exchange-SenderADCheck: 1
X-Microsoft-Antispam: BCL:0;
X-Microsoft-Antispam-Message-Info: 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
X-Forefront-Antispam-Report: CIP:255.255.255.255; CTRY:; LANG:en; SCL:1; SRV:; IPV:NLI; SFV:NSPM; H:VI1PR07MB6704.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com; PTR:; CAT:NONE; SFS:(39860400002)(376002)(366004)(136003)(346002)(396003)(86362001)(52116002)(478600001)(5660300002)(186003)(8676002)(16576012)(87266011)(83380400001)(66946007)(66556008)(6916009)(36756003)(8936002)(2906002)(26005)(33656002)(6666004)(4326008)(66476007)(956004)(6486002)(38100700002)(2616005)(16526019)(38350700002)(53546011)(316002); DIR:OUT; SFP:1102;
X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData: =?Windows-1252?Q?TJm8gziIkLRvsVDS0PMlBGwi1Bfgs1O7TkPRw57wNDTRFSTPU0zhC4Qd?= =?Windows-1252?Q?rESFNZrUUsxU/8s6Miei+XmEzi9GtGMSm25mfxdjynke/F3+IRGm8u4C?= =?Windows-1252?Q?kydZwmhMsTvNNHEt++hQ8WZIkbc9KpRymkZEmWEbwZRg1qNtd16boOt+?= =?Windows-1252?Q?F92tUdVif7z7cmv8QyQ8hirrPLrjn+hz5W48OZ+goe2ANkQHFE22wH8F?= =?Windows-1252?Q?PEyqmwDGTwocpQhZtYGd94TRQIQ73UGv4HckFIXs76aEfRqqsSb68osj?= =?Windows-1252?Q?xmVt1daZ5Re9235Gr6GQW49lisb5V1OGKLKuOZL9PqOb8C3q+4Kv2P26?= =?Windows-1252?Q?xyk+FCAkZ+ILr/8B2zMFfcgiaBhavcA2kXmJHxY6Pwqwk9fWaaWyQo0L?= =?Windows-1252?Q?NWD4TC3eCgJr9QRCU+TYQ+c0pEVFIs8c4NU2TrKxhK5CcsvsN0f0VBkc?= =?Windows-1252?Q?HQYELOXmFoFyUc5oEN9H7T1RnuDz2D6Vydl6KIex9EevF5BdNIUqjUD/?= =?Windows-1252?Q?bJjxOXLUWk5Fhw2+PuN3cJ2wdUQConSH5+5gJ9Okixmzjhumh9sa6Iil?= =?Windows-1252?Q?RM60x4AVxSQJ1SeayG7kJ2F7RR65D5kOZ1UyMrosWsMIjTaxBa00GFiP?= =?Windows-1252?Q?mxS5RReZd/6TD46ts95fenDDO9tFIhLTtu02efLzE0OM8/wp0jLKvU4x?= =?Windows-1252?Q?OrjBRLSf7DONJ9ydaAE7KG/DXteiP1ypvwXynV4guEl/rirPpiqGR8lc?= =?Windows-1252?Q?qd53Z+zyLKxUNdFNkYKPqhWEFJL7VdklCmvyRjuTwPA1VNYUvn9h/127?= =?Windows-1252?Q?NtCHkl7cYRoaNnof2r2A44UGVDI0qXJyiAuaJI7IJzq5/PRB0mFnKKg5?= =?Windows-1252?Q?kdYd2gNbCcRlyviL7cYEm82VzI3C0SEaLbANAqDe1CPydbx2ohbqr2He?= =?Windows-1252?Q?jvRkRQ6gWjyEahNDy7mvYL7G6U1LavnR2Fzi9Re+hb5l/nIcKEqxgU/G?= =?Windows-1252?Q?5F2EHGRdX7nKSE6unKj8J5FA4/JIKGpQLaDghMocCGp/vclilnlx7Xeo?= =?Windows-1252?Q?oHxF8DNY8Z1x48CaSNOVqcXPB6NCB8aO4vrfKa2N2yV8zGjy0ePIMPtS?= =?Windows-1252?Q?menYkPyk00/dAlETIbqos0x4QW6g9WqglBl/qclwbhLQu5GArFH0r+Kt?= =?Windows-1252?Q?2SGUsZKG5ZnUY2I9c7X1qGEcLA6+cBBAfdM6cB8jEaGPdewWg6lw4njc?= =?Windows-1252?Q?83iCiVg178mwBi9SBkrSd0fRtGq9396bpS7KCYSR5yMFPhu6vz2MGTNz?= =?Windows-1252?Q?lB5LRNptEadCe8206uC+jysCiTsj4V5e1IlRlMFPY1A476pfz773rtTf?= =?Windows-1252?Q?2+ZLkSxiiEMXLp7IE4SlqCgA20BbxvIiomXq143kQMF2MMW/TK5BIao5?=
X-OriginatorOrg: btconnect.com
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: 9c0b6a55-d1e8-4312-5f8a-08d916c1d8ae
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthSource: VI1PR07MB6704.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthAs: Internal
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-OriginalArrivalTime: 14 May 2021 10:20:07.3842 (UTC)
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-FromEntityHeader: Hosted
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Id: cf8853ed-96e5-465b-9185-806bfe185e30
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-MailboxType: HOSTED
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-UserPrincipalName: P6vASJ45L30oQMRX/F9I9jmripEbZaxgg5ifuJQ/Ezh/IvHI64NwS1UmsJdHgDXq3jxrns706yssq6i4zPn70Q==
X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: VI1PR07MB3517
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/babel/9jbmpw7muM11tQ9WNdmxnnIwJ5k>
Subject: Re: [babel] Last Call: <draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09.txt> (YANG Data Model for Babel) to Proposed Standard
X-BeenThere: babel@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: "A list for discussion of the Babel Routing Protocol." <babel.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/babel>, <mailto:babel-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/babel/>
List-Post: <mailto:babel@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:babel-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/babel>, <mailto:babel-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 14 May 2021 10:20:16 -0000

On 12/05/2021 21:46, Mahesh Jethanandani wrote:
> This has been addressed in -10 version of the draft. Cheers.

Indeed it has.

I note that some YANG clauses have [references] in them which are likely 
not plain text; doubtless that will be fixed at some point in the process.

Tom Petch
>
>> On Apr 12, 2021, at 1:38 AM, tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> wrote:
>>
>> This I-D introduces a new and unnecessary YANG prefix in defiance of BCP216 s.4.2.
>>
>> It imports ietf-yang-types, perhaps the most widely imported module in the world, and RFC6991, where that module is specified, defines the proper prefix as 'yang'.  This I-D invents a different one. Technically, YANG can cope with this but that does not make it a sensible thing to do.
>>
>> Tom Petch
>>
>> On 08/04/2021 13:43, The IESG wrote:
>>>
>>> The IESG has received a request from the Babel routing protocol WG (babel) to
>>> consider the following document: - 'YANG Data Model for Babel'
>>>    <draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09.txt> as Proposed Standard
>>>
>>> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
>>> comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
>>> last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2021-04-22. Exceptionally, comments may
>>> be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning
>>> of the Subject line to allow automated sorting.
>>>
>>> Abstract
>>>
>>>
>>>     This document defines a data model for the Babel routing protocol.
>>>     The data model is defined using the YANG data modeling language.
>>>
>>>
>>>