[babel] Minor format problem in draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-04

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Fri, 03 January 2020 04:27 UTC

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Subject: [babel] Minor format problem in draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-04
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Hi Mahesh,

Happy New Year!

There seems to be a minor format problem in this draft, in particular four
lines, all identical, that are 76 characters long. Lines over 72 characters
are not allowed in Internet Drafts.

On page 34, page 35, page 36, and page 38 the following line occurs:
            xmlns:babel="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-babel">babel:babel
Is it possible to fold this into something like
            xmlns:babel=
                "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-babel">babel:babel
or just reduce the indent of those lines?

Thanks,
Donald
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