Re: [babel] I-D Action: draft-ietf-babel-mac-relaxed-01.txt

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Wed, 28 September 2022 01:17 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 27 Sep 2022 21:17:01 -0400
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Subject: Re: [babel] I-D Action: draft-ietf-babel-mac-relaxed-01.txt
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Hi,

It seems to me that there is WG consensus for this document. I will so
declare unless there is some objection in the next ten days.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Thu, Sep 8, 2022 at 4:13 PM David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hello Babel enthusiasts,
>
> Many thanks to Juliusz for writing draft-ietf-babel-mac-relaxed-02.
> I have read the diff from -01 to -02 and it fully addresses the
> editorial comments I had made on -01 (copied below). I believe this
> document is ready for publication.
>
> Thanks,
> David
>
>
> On Tue, Jun 14, 2022 at 3:55 PM David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> I have reviewed this document and believe that the protocol itself is solid and ready for advancement but the doc needs just a little bit of editorial work: I found section 3.2 a little bit hard to follow. I would suggest giving variable names to the numbers at play and using those instead of "right edge" and "left edge" because it took me a second to deduce that the highest seen packet number was equal to the left edge and not the right edge of the window. I personally like pseudo-code for this purpose but prose also works if we can define the terms a little better. Maybe adding some prose to the definition of right edge and left edge would be enough to make this fine though.
>>
>> I unfortunately no longer have access to a Babel implementation to actually implement this, but I imagined I had one when I read the draft and it was straightforward to add this feature to my imaginary implementation. Now I just need to write an imaginary compiler.
>>
>> nits/typos:
>> s/WiFi/Wi-Fi/
>> s/porte/port/
>> s/complementar/complementary/
>>
>> David
>>
>> On Sat, Jun 11, 2022 at 1:30 PM Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> wrote:
>>>
>>> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-babel-mac-relaxed-01.txt
>>>
>>> I feel that this version is complete.  There are two independent
>>> implementations (babeld and BIRD).  Please review.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>>
>>> -- Juliusz
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