[babel] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09

Radek Krejčí via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 01 May 2021 20:29 UTC

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Reviewer: Radek Krejčí
Review result: Ready with Nits

This is my YANG doctor review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model containing
ietf-babel@2021-03-12.yang module. The draft and the module are well written
and I have just two minor comments:

- The copyright year in the YANG module should be probably 2021, not 2020.

- Some values of the specific statements (e.g. min-elements) are quoted despite
it is not necessary (the value must be a number or a single word). I propose to
use pyang/yanglint to generate the module since it also unifies all the
formatting and quoting.