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Re: [babel] I-D Action: draft-ietf-babel-v4viav6-08.txt

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Sun, 27 February 2022 23:23 UTC

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Hi Juliusz,

Fixing in AUTH48 should be fine. Expect the draft to be handed over to
the RFC Editor soon.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Fri, Feb 25, 2022 at 6:34 AM Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> wrote:
>
> > Agreed that the changes look good but there is one added typo: in Section 4.2.1
> > we have "prased" which I guess should be "parsed".
>
> My bad.  There's also the mistake pointed out by Benjamin:
>
> > My only remaining comment (from skimming the diff), a nit really, is that
> > in IPv4 all of 127/8 is loopback, so we should say "a loopback address"
> > rather than "the loopback address".
>
> I'll fix both of these in AUTH-48.
>
> -- Juliusz

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