Re: [babel] I-D Action: draft-ietf-babel-mac-relaxed-01.txt

Hello Babel enthusiasts,

Many thanks to Juliusz for writing draft-ietf-babel-mac-relaxed-02.
I have read the diff from -01 to -02 and it fully addresses the
editorial comments I had made on -01 (copied below). I believe this
document is ready for publication.

Thanks,
David

On Tue, Jun 14, 2022 at 3:55 PM David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>
wrote:

> I have reviewed this document and believe that the protocol itself is
> solid and ready for advancement but the doc needs just a little bit of
> editorial work: I found section 3.2 a little bit hard to follow. I would
> suggest giving variable names to the numbers at play and using those
> instead of "right edge" and "left edge" because it took me a second to
> deduce that the highest seen packet number was equal to the left edge and
> not the right edge of the window. I personally like pseudo-code for this
> purpose but prose also works if we can define the terms a little better.
> Maybe adding some prose to the definition of right edge and left edge would
> be enough to make this fine though.
>
> I unfortunately no longer have access to a Babel implementation to
> actually implement this, but I imagined I had one when I read the draft and
> it was straightforward to add this feature to my imaginary implementation.
> Now I just need to write an imaginary compiler.
>
> nits/typos:
> s/WiFi/Wi-Fi/
> s/porte/port/
> s/complementar/complementary/
>
> David
>
> On Sat, Jun 11, 2022 at 1:30 PM Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> wrote:
>
>> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-babel-mac-relaxed-01.txt
>>
>> I feel that this version is complete.  There are two independent
>> implementations (babeld and BIRD).  Please review.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> -- Juliusz
>>
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