From nobody Wed Apr 21 07:31:11 2021 Return-Path: X-Original-To: babel@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: babel@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2093E3A29F7; Wed, 21 Apr 2021 07:31:10 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1.399 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.399 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, FREEMAIL_FORGED_FROMDOMAIN=0.249, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS=0.249, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_BLOCKED=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H2=-0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=no autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id P1lZjstOyqN5; Wed, 21 Apr 2021 07:31:05 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail-lj1-f180.google.com (mail-lj1-f180.google.com [209.85.208.180]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 38BE33A29F3; Wed, 21 Apr 2021 07:31:01 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-lj1-f180.google.com with SMTP id z23so1478419lji.4; Wed, 21 Apr 2021 07:31:01 -0700 (PDT) X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=VO9NMTG67RijNXJ03mX3FEemmohomm5X2hn3T0jQnhU=; b=DRM3jaA/cS458vdLhtz7+4nsER3ZSugUzswJWr8yH2J2QePsJHgj0bqq3PYIgANDZe +bm5H8dhsiriWojgPsu/L6qvkIbFZWWs6K072+JmvTG159PQUFraW/rXhEtcphI/DYb0 98zBzk0OapHrxCnpVu9Qm1aLvnxmoSZaFbU+3T7ZPGwH/Knzdtq7xe1zUuSvd62Rn/th 3jKVT+ajRhohcTq6y7gCSmUX513VQ8fkzZo2H76iyknWRdd9Dt2yutnmV+Ee1WoAW/6F MC6+nf3t8hzCPy43NArHI6MeqXK6tPjmBnn1WzL3ttm0inPB+1vbkiGCL26fPBGsFluS vLkw== X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM530zLMw8v49F1F4FF9M1IgZc0RgV92uPaPNgmMGAjCPybSEmKoCr JKppaDkG+nPyWEZfkCrFC/NMUz3IEm41H8AMFRM= X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJxuIZwefwKyPSMBLRmHXxq1EoAgEFVdZl2Lxnrnd+X5jJosUAIIgL5zdXfa8d6XPzgYLkF6gMv3hc+9nm/sFa4= X-Received: by 2002:a2e:9b16:: with SMTP id u22mr18703462lji.313.1619015459129; Wed, 21 Apr 2021 07:30:59 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 References: <160402882613.17493.9555978018041518117@ietfa.amsl.com> <877dkvaeys.wl-jch@irif.fr> In-Reply-To: <877dkvaeys.wl-jch@irif.fr> From: Barry Leiba Date: Wed, 21 Apr 2021 10:30:48 -0400 Message-ID: To: Juliusz Chroboczek Cc: Donald Eastlake , The IESG , babel@ietf.org, babel-chairs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-babel-source-specific@ietf.org Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="00000000000053cbb805c07c6958" Archived-At: Subject: Re: [babel] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-source-specific-07: (with COMMENT) X-BeenThere: babel@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: "A list for discussion of the Babel Routing Protocol." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 21 Apr 2021 14:31:10 -0000 --00000000000053cbb805c07c6958 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Thanks, Juliusz... I appreciate the response, and thanks for addressing my comments. Barry On Wed, Apr 21, 2021 at 10:29 AM Juliusz Chroboczek wrote: > Thanks for your comments. > > > =E2=80=94 Section 5.2 =E2=80=94 > > Please expand =E2=80=9CAE=E2=80=9D on first use. > > Done. > > > A node MUST NOT send > > a wildcard retraction with an attached source prefix, and a node tha= t > > receives a wildcard retraction with a source prefix MUST ignore it. > > > The =E2=80=9Cit=E2=80=9D here is ambiguous: please specify =E2=80=9CMUS= T ignore the source > prefix=E2=80=9D or > > =E2=80=9CMUST ignore the retraction=E2=80=9D. The same comment applies= also to the > subsequent > > paragraph. > > Done. > > > =E2=80=94 Section 6.1 =E2=80=94 > > For what it=E2=80=99s worth, I don=E2=80=99t find the diagram to add an= ything to the > text, and > > I wouldn=E2=80=99t have a clue what the diagram was trying to say witho= ut the > text. > > The whole section has been rewritten and moved to the introduction. > > > Packets > > destined to D but not sourced in S will be forwarded by A to B, and > > by B to A, causing a persistent routing loop > > > That text is describing not what will happen with this standard, but wh= at > > *would* happen if this standard didn=E2=80=99t correct for it. So plea= se change > =E2=80=9Cwill > > be forwarded=E2=80=9D to=E2=80=9Dwould be forwarded=E2=80=9D, > > Done. This is now Section 1.3. > > Thanks, > > -- Juliusz > --00000000000053cbb805c07c6958 Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Thanks, Juliusz... I appreciate the response, and thanks = for addressing my comments.

Barry

On Wed, Apr 21, 2021 at 10:29 AM Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> wrote:
Thanks for your comments.

> =E2=80=94 Section 5.2 =E2=80=94
> Please expand =E2=80=9CAE=E2=80=9D on first use.

Done.

>=C2=A0 =C2=A0 A node MUST NOT send
>=C2=A0 =C2=A0 a wildcard retraction with an attached source prefix, and= a node that
>=C2=A0 =C2=A0 receives a wildcard retraction with a source prefix MUST = ignore it.

> The =E2=80=9Cit=E2=80=9D here is ambiguous: please specify =E2=80=9CMU= ST ignore the source prefix=E2=80=9D or
> =E2=80=9CMUST ignore the retraction=E2=80=9D.=C2=A0 The same comment a= pplies also to the subsequent
> paragraph.

Done.

> =E2=80=94 Section 6.1 =E2=80=94
> For what it=E2=80=99s worth, I don=E2=80=99t find the diagram to add a= nything to the text, and
> I wouldn=E2=80=99t have a clue what the diagram was trying to say with= out the text.

The whole section has been rewritten and moved to the introduction.

>=C2=A0 =C2=A0 Packets
>=C2=A0 =C2=A0 destined to D but not sourced in S will be forwarded by A= to B, and
>=C2=A0 =C2=A0 by B to A, causing a persistent routing loop

> That text is describing not what will happen with this standard, but w= hat
> *would* happen if this standard didn=E2=80=99t correct for it.=C2=A0 S= o please change =E2=80=9Cwill
> be forwarded=E2=80=9D to=E2=80=9Dwould be forwarded=E2=80=9D,

Done.=C2=A0 This is now Section 1.3.

Thanks,

-- Juliusz
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