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Re: [babel] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06

Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> Sun, 07 July 2019 14:26 UTC

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From: Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06
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Dear Joel,

Thank you very much for your kind review.

> Nits/editorial comments:
>    In section 2.2, in talking about "metric M", if I have understood properly,
>    I think it would be clearer if you referred to "metric value M".

This section has been expanded with human-readable text and a reference to
a research paper, and should therefore now be easier to understand.
I have, however, decided to follow the usual style of mathematical
writing, and have therefore chosen not to follow your advice.  I hope that
is okay.

Thanks again,

-- Juliusz

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