Re: [babel] I-D Action: draft-ietf-babel-v4viav6-08.txt

Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> Fri, 25 February 2022 11:34 UTC

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> Agreed that the changes look good but there is one added typo: in Section 4.2.1
> we have "prased" which I guess should be "parsed".

My bad.  There's also the mistake pointed out by Benjamin:

> My only remaining comment (from skimming the diff), a nit really, is that
> in IPv4 all of 127/8 is loopback, so we should say "a loopback address"
> rather than "the loopback address".

I'll fix both of these in AUTH-48.

-- Juliusz