Re: [babel] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11: (with COMMENT)

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From: "STARK, BARBARA H" <bs7652@att.com>
To: "'Erik Kline'" <ek.ietf@gmail.com>, "'The IESG'" <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Erik,
Thanks for your review. My comment is below.
Barbara
 
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> COMMENT:
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> [[ nits ]]
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> [ section 3.1 ]
> 
> * s/running and operational/running any operational/?

The running datastore and operational datastore are distinct concepts.
Some data models (like YANG) have distinct, replicated sets of parameters for these.
Others (like TR-181) don't, and use two separate parameters.
I believe the "and" is correct.