Re: [babel] Routing area directorate early (QA) review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability

Alexander Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com> Mon, 06 February 2017 08:55 UTC

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From: Alexander Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com>
To: Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Routing area directorate early (QA) review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability
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Dear Juliusz,
Lots of thanks for your response. 
I think that you have accurately summarized the gist of my concerns, and I hope it is possible to update the draft accordingly.

I'd like to stress that I definitely do not have any issues  with the qualifiers like "whenever possible/applicable" when it comes to providing additional details, especially when it comes to actual deployments. 

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Sasha

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From: Juliusz Chroboczek [mailto:jch@irif.fr] 
Sent: Sunday, February 05, 2017 7:19 PM
To: Alexander Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com>
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Subject: Re: Routing area directorate early (QA) review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability

Dear Alexander, dear all,

I've read your review carefully, and you have convinced me that this document is not ready for publication as an informational RFC.  I think you make three very good points:

  (1) the introduction is lacking;
  (2) the deployments should, whenever possible, be described in more detail;
  (3) the usage of extensions should be stressed whenever applicable.

This is very useful feedback, for which I am grateful.

Donald -- do I need to do something in order to interrupt the last call?

Thanks to all for your help,

-- Juliusz