[bess] AD Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-06

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 26 January 2018 22:47 UTC

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Subject: [bess] AD Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-06
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Dear authors:

Not much I can say about this document, except that it would have been nice
if it was published earlier to provide background to other EVPN document.

Thanks for your work!!

I just have a couple of comments on the references (see below).  I am
starting the IETF Last Call.

Alvaro.


R1. These references can be Informative: rfc4761, rfc4762, rfc6074

R2. There is no reference in the text to rfc4364, rfc7117