Re: [bess] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07: (with COMMENT)

Ravi Singh <ravis@juniper.net> Sat, 20 April 2019 02:12 UTC

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From: Ravi Singh <ravis@juniper.net>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
CC: "draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags@ietf.org>, Mach Chen <mach.chen@huawei.com>, "bess-chairs@ietf.org" <bess-chairs@ietf.org>, "bess@ietf.org" <bess@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [bess] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Roman
Thanks for your comments.
Been addressed in -08.
Regards
Ravi


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roman Danyliw via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
> Sent: Monday, April 8, 2019 6:33 PM
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> Subject: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-
> flags-07: (with COMMENT)
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> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
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> A few nits:
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> (1) In Section 3.1.  Typo.  s/seqence/sequence/
> 
> (2) Section 4.  Typo. s/VPLS,there/VPLS, there/
> 
> (3) Section 5.1.  Editorial.  s/the below specified network topology/the
> network topology specified in Section 6/
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