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BESS WG, BESS chairs, and authors:

This is a requested review from IDR chairs for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb-22.txt

I'm not attaching a file because it is short.

Cheerily, Sue Hares

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Status: Ready with nits (small technical nits and editorial nits)
Summary: This is a very useful draft for EVPN.
The draft has solid technical content and flow.
A few minor edits will fill in the gaps.

Caveat: Keyur Patel said he reviewed this draft, but non-of the chairs (IDR and BESS) can find it.

I'm sure Keyur review was great.  I just can find it.

Editorial/technical issue:

Section 4.1 - you should clear state that value units outside of 0x00 or 0x01 are invalid.
Also, you should clearly state only 0x00 and 0x01 are valid.

Section 4.1 - what happens if Extended Community is malformed?  See RFC7606.
Please provide details.  You are missing a clearly delineated section on BGP error handling.

Editorial only:

1) spelling check:

5.2 - recevied - paragraph 1, sentence 1
5.2 - badwidth - paragraph 5, stanrding Please note.
6.2 - (VLAN-a % 4) - last paragraph.

Section 10.0 - IANA considerastions needs to use a better formatting.

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