[bess] Re: Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-split-horizon-10: (with COMMENT)

"Jorge Rabadan (Nokia)" <jorge.rabadan@nokia.com> Sun, 18 August 2024 01:17 UTC

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From: "Jorge Rabadan (Nokia)" <jorge.rabadan@nokia.com>
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Hi Mahesh,

Thak you very much for the review.
Please see in-line with [jorge].

Thanks!
Jorge

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Section 1.2, paragraph 25
>    This document extends the EVPN multihoming procedures to allow
>    operators to select the preferred Split Horizon method for a given
>    NVO tunnel according to their specific requirements.  The choice
>    between Local Bias and ESI Label Split Horizon is now allowed for
>    tunnel encapsulations that support both methods, and this selection
>    is advertised along with the EVPN A-D per ES route.  IP tunnels that
>    do not support both methods, such as VXLAN or NVGRE, will continue to
>    adhere to the procedures specified in [RFC8365].


How is the operator able to make the selection of Split Horizon? Is there a YANG model?
[jorge] No, this “choice” configuration is not defined in any existing IETF yang model yet, afaik. We modified the second sentence as follows:
“The choice between Local Bias and ESI Label Split Horizon is now allowed (by configuration) for tunnel encapsulations that support both methods, and this selection is advertised along with the EVPN A-D per ES route.”


Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see
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guidance:

 * Term "his"; alternatives might be "they", "them", "their"
 * Term "native"; alternatives might be "built-in", "fundamental", "ingrained",
   "intrinsic", "original"
[jorge] we fixed both, thanks.


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"RED", paragraph 1
>         0 0  --> Default SHT. Backwards compatible with [RFC8365] and [RFC7432]


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