[bess] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-06

Joe Clarke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 16 March 2025 08:25 UTC

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Reviewer: Joe Clarke
Review result: Has Nits

I have been asked to review this draft on behalf of the OPS directorate.  This
draft updates RFC9252 to add clarity for processing SRv6 SID advertisements for
SRv6 endpoint behaviors that support arguments.  From an OPS perspective, I
think this document is ready.  I particularly appreciated the call to log
likely config errors to aid with troubleshooting.  The additional examples were
also helpful.

Overall, I only found two small nits.  In Section 3:

s/The procedures in this document remains/The procedures in this document
remain/

And in Section 4:

s/the alternative method specified in document/the alternative method specified
in this document/

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