[bess] Two minor last call comments on draft-ietf-l3vpn-acceptown-community-08.txt
"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Mon, 24 November 2014 19:00 UTC
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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Date: Mon, 24 Nov 2014 19:00:44 -0000
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Subject: [bess] Two minor last call comments on draft-ietf-l3vpn-acceptown-community-08.txt
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Hi, Thanks for this work. In a new revision after last call, please: - Check whether you really need the pre-RFC5378 boilerplate and remove it if possible - Change the word "proposes" to "defines" Thanks, Adrian
- [bess] Two minor last call comments on draft-ietf… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [bess] Two minor last call comments on draft-… Thomas Morin