[bess] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 09 April 2019 01:32 UTC

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Subject: [bess] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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A few nits:

(1) In Section 3.1.  Typo.  s/seqence/sequence/

(2) Section 4.  Typo. s/VPLS,there/VPLS, there/

(3) Section 5.1.  Editorial.  s/the below specified network topology/the
network topology specified in Section 6/