[bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Thu, 08 February 2018 14:01 UTC

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Subject: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-02-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-09
IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In section 3.1 toward the end "For example, we can use ingress replication for
on EVI100" no need for "for on"

[bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess… Roni Even