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Hi Linda,

Thanks for expeditiously addressing most of my technical comments and
retaining the reference to draft-ietf-idr-sdwan-edge-discovery.

I will update my ballot on this document shortly to change my position from
DISCUSS.

Thanks,
Ketan


On Wed, May 27, 2026 at 12:11=E2=80=AFPM Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurew=
ei.com>
wrote:

> Ketan, Med,
>
>
>
> I have uploaded revision (v35) that incorporated Ketan latest markup and
> resolutions to Med=E2=80=99s comments:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage/
>
>
>
> Please let me know if you have more issues.
>
>
>
> Thank you very much,
>
> Linda
>
> *From:* Linda Dunbar
> *Sent:* Tuesday, May 26, 2026 10:58 PM
> *To:* Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
> *Cc:* The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; bess-chairs@ietf.org; BESS <bess@ietf.org=
>;
> draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage.all@ietf.org; matthew.bocci@nokia.com
> *Subject:* RE: Ketan Talaulikar's Discuss on
> draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-32: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
>
>
>
> Ketan,
>
>
>
> Thanks for the markup. I accepted your suggestion of moving the other
> published RFC references you identified to Normative reference.
>
>
>
> My hesitation is only with making the in-progress [SD-WAN-Discovery] draf=
t
> normative. That would put this document on hold until another draft
> completes, which may take an unknown amount of time. I have seen document=
s
> wait more than five years after IESG approval because of a normative
> dependency. I have also seen cases where, by the time the dependency was
> finally cleared, authors had moved on and it became difficult to complete
> the final publication updates.
>
>
>
> This document has already gone through many years of WG discussion and
> review. I am very concerned about putting it into a long post-approval ho=
ld
> if the dependency can be avoided through clearer wording.
>
>
>
> We have revised the text so that the claims stand on their own and
> [SD-WAN-Discovery] is cited only as one possible approach, not as a
> prerequisite. Would you be willing to let [SD-WAN-Discovery] remain
> Informative if we make that separation explicit, while moving the
> applicable published RFCs to Normative?
>
>
>
> Thank you very much,
>
>
>
> Linda
>
>
>
> *From:* Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
> *Sent:* Tuesday, May 26, 2026 10:03 PM
> *To:* Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>
> *Cc:* The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; bess-chairs@ietf.org; BESS <bess@ietf.org=
>;
> draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage.all@ietf.org; matthew.bocci@nokia.com
> *Subject:* Re: Ketan Talaulikar's Discuss on
> draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-32: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
>
>
>
> Hi Linda,
>
>
>
> Thanks for your response and for sharing the proposed update. To help us
> conclude faster, I've provided the suggested changes (all of them related
> to references) in the Word document that you had shared with tracked
> changes.
>
>
>
> I see that you are already discussing the nuances between normative and
> informative references with Med. I concur with Med's observations and (I
> believe) the changes I've suggested align with them. I will let you and M=
ed
> continue that discussion.
>
>
>
> Once this version is posted, I will update my ballot.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Ketan
>
>
>
>
>
> On Wed, May 27, 2026 at 6:26=E2=80=AFAM Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@future=
wei.com>
> wrote:
>
> Ketan,
>
>
>
> Thank you. Please see the proposed resolution below marked by [Linda3].
>
>
>
> Attached is the Diff file between v34 and the v33.
>
>
>
> Linda
>
>
>
> *From:* Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
> *Sent:* Tuesday, May 26, 2026 3:26 AM
> *To:* Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>
> *Cc:* The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; bess-chairs@ietf.org; BESS <bess@ietf.org=
>;
> draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage.all@ietf.org; matthew.bocci@nokia.com
> *Subject:* Re: Ketan Talaulikar's Discuss on
> draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-32: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
>
>
>
> Hi Linda,
>
>
>
> Please check inline below for follow-up with KT2. Also, check all the way
> to the end of the email so you are not missing the previous conversation
> where some points were still under discussion.
>
>
>
> You can submit the update directly or share the diff if you would like to
> cross-check or discuss further.
>
>
>
> On Tue, May 26, 2026 at 12:48=E2=80=AFPM Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futur=
ewei.com>
> wrote:
>
> Ketan,
>
>
>
> Thank you for the additional comments and suggestions. Please see the
> proposed resolutions below, marked with [Linda2].
>
>
>
> Linda
>
>
>
> *From:* Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
> *Sent:* Friday, May 22, 2026 5:46 AM
> *To:* Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>
> *Cc:* The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; bess-chairs@ietf.org; bess@ietf.org;
> draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage@ietf.org; matthew.bocci@nokia.com
> *Subject:* Re: Ketan Talaulikar's Discuss on
> draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-32: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
>
>
>
> Hi Linda,
>
>
>
> Thanks for the super fast response and for posting the update. Please
> check inline below for follow-up.
>
>
>
> For the <discuss-1>, I am highlighting a few other text in the document
> that I find making asserts and comparisons that do not seem to be
> substantiated by details or reference. Can you please consider rephrasing
> these sentences?
>
>
>
> Section 5.1 says:
>
>
>
>    In small SD-WAN networks with a modest number of nodes,
>    traditional approaches such as the hub-and-spoke model, employing
>    Next Hop Resolution Protocol (NHRP)[RFC2332] or a centralized hub
>    managing edge nodes, including the mapping of local and public
>    addresses along with tunnel identifiers, has proven effective.
>    However, for larger SD-WAN networks, with more than 100 nodes and
>    encompassing diverse underlays, the conventional approach becomes
>    increasingly complex, error-prone, and difficult to manage.
>
>
>
> It is OK to reference NHRP as an IETF technology. Can you cite references
> to SD-WAN implementations or solutions that use NHRP? This paragraph
> asserts that NHRP is the conventional approach while many SD-WAN solution=
s
> exist (that you consider traditional?) that do not suffer from any of the=
se
> challenges. If they do, please substantiate that claim with references. W=
hy
> compare? Also, "traditional approach" is unspecified - aren't there SD-WA=
N
> solutions that do more than use the hub-and-spoke model? Why not just sta=
te
> how things are done with BGP?
>
>
>
> [Linda2] NHRP is referenced because DMVPN-like IPsec/GRE overlay designs
> use NHRP for tunnel endpoint resolution. Some SD-WAN products support or
> coexist with DMVPN-like deployment models; for example, Cisco documentati=
on
> describes DMVPN tunnels being configured through Cisco Catalyst SD-WAN
> Manager. However, we agree that it may not be appropriate for this docume=
nt
> to generalize such vendor-specific deployment practices or to rely on
> vendor implementation references. Therefore, we can make the following
> wording change:
>
>
>
> Old:
>
> =E2=80=9CIn small SD-WAN networks with a modest number of nodes, traditio=
nal
> approaches such as the hub-and-spoke model, employing Next Hop Resolution
> Protocol (NHRP)[RFC2332] or a centralized hub managing edge nodes,
> including the mapping of local and public addresses along with tunnel
> identifiers, has proven effective. However, for larger SD-WAN networks,
> with more than 100 nodes and encompassing diverse underlays, the
> conventional approach becomes increasingly complex, error-prone, and
> difficult to manage.=E2=80=9D
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *=E2=80=9CIn small SD-WAN networks with a modest number of nodes, a hub-a=
nd-spoke
> overlay model, including designs that use Next Hop Resolution Protocol
> (NHRP) [RFC2332] for tunnel endpoint resolution, can be manageable. In
> larger SD-WAN networks with many edge nodes and diverse underlays,
> additional mechanisms are often needed to distribute reachability, tunnel
> endpoint information, and policy-related attributes in a scalable and
> consistent manner. This document describes how BGP can be used for that
> purpose.=E2=80=9D*
>
>
>
> KT2> This text works.
>
>
>
>
>
>    In summary, BGP combines scalability, robust policy enforcement,
>    interoperability, and centralized security,
> *making it an ideal    choice* for managing SD-WAN overlay networks,
> particularly as they
>    grow in size and complexity.
>
>
>
> BGP is certainly a choice. Can you substantiate that it is an ideal choic=
e
> without supporting references that analyze the other choices?
>
>
>
> [Linda2] Good suggestion. The intent of this section is not to prove that
> BGP is superior to every possible SD-WAN control-plane mechanism, but to
> explain why BGP is suitable for the SD-WAN control-plane functions scoped
> by this document. How about the following wording change?
>
>
>
> Old:
>
> =E2=80=9CIn summary, BGP combines scalability, robust policy enforcement,
> interoperability, and centralized security, making it an ideal choice for
> managing SD-WAN overlay networks, particularly as they grow in size and
> complexity.=E2=80=9D
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *=E2=80=9CIn summary, BGP is well suited to these SD-WAN overlay control-=
plane
> functions because it provides standardized mechanisms for scalable route
> distribution, policy-based route propagation, VPN membership control usin=
g
> Route Targets, and extensible encoding of tunnel-related attributes, whic=
h
> are especially useful as the network grows in size and complexity*.=E2=80=
=9D
>
>
>
> KT2> This text also works.
>
>
>
>
>
> A related point appears in section 5.1 and also in other places in this
> document. There is a comparison between "traditional IPsec VPN" and SD-WA=
N.
> I do not understand the motivation for such comparisons. Are they not
> comparing apples and oranges? Is this document proposing BGP for
> traditional IPsec VPNs or for an SD-WAN solution that aligns more closely
> with MEF/Mplify specifications? Why not just state how things are done wi=
th
> BGP?
>
>
>
> [Linda2] This document is about using BGP as the SD-WAN control plane.
> Here, =E2=80=9Ctraditional=E2=80=9D was intended to refer to SD-WAN deplo=
yments that use
> IPsec VPN tunnels for the data plane and proprietary mechanisms for the
> control plane. We agree that the term is ambiguous and will replace it wi=
th
> more specific wording, such as =E2=80=9Cproprietary SD-WAN control-plane
> mechanisms.=E2=80=9D
>
>
>
> KT2> Thanks. Replacing "traditional" with the specific types of VPN/SD-WA=
N
> would help.
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
> Please search for "traditional" in the document. You will see many simila=
r
> comparisons and assertions that I am unsure are substantiated but more
> importantly, they are probably unnecessary.
>
>
>
> [Linda2] Agree. We have searched for =E2=80=9Ctraditional=E2=80=9D throug=
hout the document.
>
> Here are the detailed changes:
>
>
>
> Section 3.2:
>
>
>
> Old :
>
> A Homogeneous Encrypted SD-WAN shares certain similarities with
>
>    traditional IPsec VPN. However, unlike IPsec VPNs, which are
>
>    typically deployed in a point-to-point fashion among a limited
>
>    number of nodes, SD-WAN networks can comprise a large number of
>
>    edge nodes, all centrally managed by a controller responsible for
>
>    configurations and policies across the network
>
> New:
>
> *A Homogeneous Encrypted SD-WAN uses IPsec tunnels to protect traffic
> between SD-WAN edges. The SD-WAN overlay may include many edge nodes, wit=
h
> configuration and policy information managed by an SD-WAN controller.*
>
>
>
> Section 4.3:
>
> Old:
>
> In a BGP-controlled SD-WAN, BGP UPDATE messages could be extended
>
>    to propagate IPsec-related attributes for each SD-WAN edge [SD-
>
>    WAN-Discovery]. This approach allows peers to receive and apply
>
>    compatible cryptographic parameters distributed over a secure
>
>    channel between the SD-WAN edge and its BGP RR, thereby
>
>    simplifying IPsec tunnel establishment and reducing reliance on
>
>    traditional IKEv2 negotiation [RFC7296].
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *In a BGP-controlled SD-WAN, BGP UPDATE messages could be extended to
> propagate IPsec-related attributes for each SD-WAN edge [SD-WAN-Discovery=
].
> These attributes allow SD-WAN edges to receive compatible IPsec parameter=
s
> from the RR over a protected BGP session. By leveraging the authenticated
> and authorized relationship between each SD-WAN edge and the RR, this
> approach can simplify IPsec tunnel establishment and reduce or eliminate
> the need for separate per-peer IKEv2 authentication between SD-WAN edges,
> depending on the deployment model [RFC7296] (see Section 5.1 and Section
> 7).*
>
>
>
>
>
> Section 5.1:
>
> Old:
>
> Unlike traditional IPsec VPN where IPsec tunnels between two edge nodes
> are treated as independent parallel links requiring duplicated control
> plane messages for load sharing, BGP in an SD-WAN context can associate
> multiple service flows with shared tunnel parameters, reducing repeated
> signaling.
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *When an IGP such as OSPF is run over IPsec tunnel interfaces, routing
> adjacencies are typically established per tunnel. In a BGP-controlled
> SD-WAN context, multiple service flows can be associated with shared tunn=
el
> parameters, reducing repeated per-tunnel control-plane configuration.*
>
>
>
>
>
> Section 6.1.1:
>
> Old:
>
> Instead of running IGP within each IPsec tunnel, as is common in
> traditional IPsec VPN, the BGP RR can propagate the client route UPDATE
> messages to authorized SD-WAN edges based on configured policies.
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *In a BGP-controlled SD-WAN, the BGP RR can propagate the client route
> UPDATE messages to authorized SD-WAN edges based on configured policies.*
>
>
>
>
>
> Section 8:
>
> Old:
>
> The primary operational difference between SD-WAN deployments and
> traditional BGP-based VPNs is that SD-WAN edge nodes often include
> Internet-facing WAN ports,
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *The primary operational difference between SD-WAN deployments and classi=
c
> BGP-based VPNs is that SD-WAN edge nodes often include Internet-facing WA=
N
> ports,*
>
>
>
>
>
> KT2> All of these are good. For the last one, instead of "classic",
> perhaps you are referring to BGP L3VPN and/or EVPN? If so, please provide
> informative reference to those specific RFCs?
>
>
>
> [Linda3] Ok, removed =E2=80=9Cclassic=E2=80=9D and added the reference:
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *A primary operational difference between SD-WAN deployments and BGP/MPLS
> IP VPNs [RFC4364][RFC4659]is that SD-WAN edge nodes often include
> Internet-facing WAN ports, which introduce additional security, filtering=
,
> and policy-enforcement requirements that are not typically present in
> BGP/MPLS IP VPN environments.*
>
>
>
>
>
> Section 6.1.1 says
>
>
>
>    Instead of running IGP within each IPsec tunnel, as is common in
>    traditional IPsec VPN, the BGP RR can propagate the client route
>    UPDATE messages to authorized SD-WAN edges based on configured
>    policies. The SD-WAN edges use BGP attributes-such as the Tunnel
>    Encapsulation Attribute and associated Color values-to associate
>    received client routes with the appropriate IPsec Security
>    Associations (SAs), thereby eliminating the need for manual
>    configuration of tunnel endpoints and service policies on each
>    edge node.
>
>
>
> SD-WAN is a rich service with several policies beyond tunnel endpoints an=
d
> their security parameters. Also, most SD-WAN solutions employ a high degr=
ee
> of automation, resulting in minimal manual configuration. Is the claim of
> "eliminating the need for manual configuration" substantiated? Does
> everything required for traffic flow management, steering and service
> configuration arrive via the BGP protocol without any manual configuratio=
n
> or provisioning outside of BGP?
>
>
>
> [Linda2] Agree.  Section 5.1 has been revised to explain the rationale
> more narrowly: =E2=80=9CBGP is well suited to these SD-WAN overlay contro=
l-plane
> functions because it provides standardized mechanisms, =E2=80=A6.=E2=80=
=9D; Section 6.1.1
> has also removed the comparison with running IGP within each IPsec
> tunnel..=E2=80=9D .  The intended point is narrower: BGP can distribute c=
lient
> reachability and tunnel-association information using standardized
> mechanisms,...
>
>
>
> Here is the updated paragraph:
>
> *In a BGP-controlled SD-WAN, the BGP RR can propagate client route UPDATE
> messages to authorized SD-WAN edges based on configured policies. The
> SD-WAN edges use BGP attributes, such as the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribu=
te
> and associated Color values, to associate received client routes with the
> appropriate IPsec Security Associations (SAs), thereby reducing per-edge
> configuration of tunnel endpoint associations. Other SD-WAN service
> policies, traffic-steering rules, and device-specific parameters may stil=
l
> be provisioned by the SD-WAN controller or local configuration.*
>
>
>
>
>
> KT2> This is good as well. Thanks.
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
> On Fri, May 22, 2026 at 12:15=E2=80=AFAM Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futur=
ewei.com>
> wrote:
>
> Ketan,
>
>
>
> Thank you very much for the comments and the suggestions.
>
> Please see below of the proposed resolutions marked by [Linda] and let us
> know if they are acceptable.
>
>
>
> Thank you, Linda
>
>
>
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> DISCUSS:
>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>
>
> Thanks to the authors and the WG for their work on this document.
>
>
>
> I have a few high-level aspects in this document that I would like to
> discuss.
>
>
>
> <discuss-1> The abstract of this document says:
>
>
>
>    This document explores the complexities involved in managing large
>
>    scale Software Defined WAN (SD-WAN) overlay networks, along with
>
>    various SD-WAN scenarios. Its objective is to illustrate how a
>
>    BGP-based control plane can effectively manage these overlay
>
>    networks by distributing edge service reachability information,
>
>    WAN port attributes, and underlay path details, thereby minimizing
>
>    manual provisioning.
>
>
>
> To my knowledge there are SD-WAN solutions from several vendors that are
>
> widely deployed today. Some of them use IETF protocols for specific
>
> functionalities while others use proprietary mechanisms (here I am not
>
> referring to IPSec or TLS but routing protocols). This text (and a few
>
> similar in the body of the document) gives the impression of comparison
>
> between a BGP-based solution that is not fully specified (not even the
>
> framework is specified) in this document against solutions deployed out
>
> there.
>
>
>
> As easy way to address this would be to rephrase such text to not make
>
> claims or comparisons. Perhaps just plainly state how use of BGP can
>
> potentially replace other proprietary mechanisms used in SD-WAN solution?
>
> E.g., the first sentence is problematic since it can be read as existing
>
> solutions have complexities that are solved by BGP without any supporting
>
> evidence or evaluation of those other solutions.
>
>
>
> [Linda] Very good point. How about the following change for the Abstract?
>
> Old:
>
> *Its objective is to illustrate how a BGP-based control plane can
> effectively manage these overlay networks...*
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *Its objective is to illustrate how a BGP-based control plane can be used
> to manage these overlay networks...*
>
>
>
> Add the following sentence at the end of the Abstract:
>
> *In such deployments, BGP can provide a standards-based mechanism for
> distributing information that may otherwise be exchanged using proprietar=
y
> SD-WAN control-plane mechanisms.*
>
>
>
> KT> Thanks. That helps. However the first sentence still remains. How
> about the following abstract?
>
>
>
>    This document illustrates how a BGP-based control plane can be
>    used to manage large scale Software Defined WAN (SD-WAN) overlay
>    networks by distributing edge service reachability information,
>    WAN port attributes, and underlay path details, thereby minimizing
>    manual provisioning. In such deployments, BGP can provide a
>    standards-based mechanism for distributing information that may
>    otherwise be exchanged using proprietary SD-WAN control-plane
>    mechanisms.
>
> [Linda3] Thanks for the suggestion. Changed. Sorry that I missed it
> yesterday.
>
> KT> This change along with an appropriate rephrasing of the similar issue=
s
> identifed at the top of this email will address this point.
>
>
>
>
>
> KT2> Is this suggested abstract ok?
>
> [Linda3] Yes. Thank you.
>
>
>
>
>
> <discuss-2> Introduction section says:
>
>
>
>    This document captures the SD-WAN scenarios, control-plane
>
>    behaviors, and forwarding considerations that motivate current and
>
>    future IETF work on SD-WAN. Publishing this material as an RFC
>
>    provides a stable, citable foundation for related protocol
>
>    specifications and ensures a shared understanding of the problem
>
>    space across the industry.
>
>
>
> As mentioned in the previous point, there are multiple SD-WAN solutions
>
> that have been developed by various vendors using IETF technologies
>
> like BGP (but with proprietary extensions) or entirely proprietary
>
> solutions. AFAIK, none of these solutions support interoperability betwee=
n
>
> SD-WAN gateways and controllers from different vendors. Please correct
>
> me if I am wrong. So, I wonder where and how the standardization of SD-WA=
N
>
> at the IETF is happening to enable such interoperability that is after al=
l
>
> the purpose of the IETF. The BGP extensions are but a small portion of wh=
at
>
> an SD-WAN solution entails. Do the claims made in that text hold?
>
>
>
> Why not just say "This document captures the SD-WAN scenarios,
> control-plane
>
> behaviors, and forwarding considerations using BGP." or something like
> that?
>
>
>
> [Linda] Thanks for the suggestion. We will take your suggestion, make the
> following wording change:
>
> Old:
>
> This document captures the SD-WAN scenarios, control-plane behaviors, and
> forwarding considerations that motivate current and future IETF work on
> SD-WAN. Publishing this material as an RFC provides a stable, citable
> foundation for related protocol specifications and ensures a shared
> understanding of the problem space across the industry. Although BGP and
> IPsec are mature technologies, applying them to SD-WAN introduces
> challenges such as scalability, segmentation, and multi-homing. By
> documenting how these mechanisms are used in SD-WAN deployments, this
> document enables consistent interpretations and supports interoperability
> without defining new protocols.
>
> New:
>
> *This document captures SD-WAN scenarios, control-plane behaviors, and
> forwarding considerations when BGP is used as the SD-WAN overlay control
> plane. Publishing this material as an RFC provides a stable, citable
> foundation for related protocol specifications that use BGP for SD-WAN
> networks and helps establish a shared understanding of the problem space
> and assumptions described in this document. This document is informationa=
l
> and does not specify a complete SD-WAN solution.*
>
>
>
> KT> Thanks. Just one point and suggestion below:
>
>
>
> s/related protocol specifications that use BGP for SD-WAN networks/relate=
d
> protocol specifications [draft-ietf-idr-sdwan-edge-discovery] that use BG=
P
> for SD-WAN networks
>
> [Linda3] To avoid creating an unintended dependency on a specific
> protocol-extension draft, we prefer to keep this sentence generic rather
> than naming [SD-WAN-Discovery] here. This document is Informational and
> does not specify the BGP extensions defined in [SD-WAN-Discovery]. The
> purpose of this paragraph is only to state that the usage document provid=
es
> shared context. How about the following wording change:
>
> =E2=80=9C*Publishing this material as an RFC establishes a shared underst=
anding
> of the SD-WAN problem space and deployment assumptions and can assist wit=
h
> future protocol development for BGP-based SD-WAN networks.=E2=80=9D*
>
>
>
> Also, for the text in section 5.3,
> doesn't draft-ietf-idr-sdwan-edge-discovery become a normative reference?
>
>
>
> KT2> Have these changes been considered?
>
> [Linda3] This document is Informational and does not require
> implementation of [SD-WAN-Discovery] to understand the SD-WAN scenarios o=
r
> the BGP usage described here. [SD-WAN-Discovery] is cited only as an
> example of one possible protocol extension/encoding in Section 5.1 and
> Section 5.2. To make it clearer, we can make the following wording change=
:
>
>
>
> Section 5.1:
>
> Old:
>
> In networks with multiple IPsec tunnels between SD-WAN edges, BGP can
> simplify tunnel management by using the SD-WAN edge discovery mechanism
> defined in [SD-WAN-Discovery] to advertise WAN-port properties and
> IPsec-related parameters.
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *In networks with multiple IPsec tunnels between SD-WAN edges, BGP can
> simplify tunnel management by advertising WAN-port properties and
> IPsec-related parameters. One possible approach for carrying such
> information is described in [SD-WAN-Discovery].*
>
>
>
> Section 5.2:
>
>  Old:
>
> In a BGP-controlled Homogeneous Encrypted SD-WAN, an SD-WAN edge (i.e.,
> C-PE) could advertise both its attached client routes and associated IPse=
c
> tunnel parameters using BGP UPDATE messages, potentially within in a sing=
le
> message that includes the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute [SD-WAN-Discover=
y].
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *In a BGP-controlled Homogeneous Encrypted SD-WAN, an SD-WAN edge (i.e.,
> C-PE) could advertise both its attached client routes and associated IPse=
c
> tunnel parameters using BGP UPDATE messages. One possible approach using
> the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute is described in [SD-WAN-Discovery].*
>
>
>
> Old:
>
> the BGP UPDATE message from C-PE2 to RR can include the client routes in
> the MP-NLRI Path Attribute, and can use the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribut=
e
> [SD-WAN-Discovery] to convey the parameters needed to associate those
> routes with the appropriate IPsec tunnel.
>
>
>
> New:
>
> *the BGP UPDATE message from C-PE2 to RR can include the client routes in
> the MP-NLRI Path Attribute and can use BGP attributes to convey the
> parameters needed to associate those routes with the appropriate IPsec
> tunnel. One possible approach using the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute is
> described in [SD-WAN-Discovery].*
>
>
>
> <discuss-3> In continuation of the previous point. There is no SD-WAN WG
> that
>
> is chartered today to study and undertake the work necessary for a
> standards
>
> based open and interoperable SD-WAN solution. Without that in place, I do
> not
>
> understand the value or benefit of publication of this document via the
> IETF
>
> track. It could as well be via ISE?
>
>
>
> [Linda] This document is limited to BGP usage for SD-WAN overlay
> control-plane scenarios; it is not intended to define a complete SD-WAN
> solution. The document has been discussed in BESS for several years and h=
as
> reached BESS WG consensus. Moving it to the Independent Stream at this
> stage would disregard the WG reviews and consensus already achieved.
>
> This document also serves an important role for the related IDR work.
> During the multi-year discussion of the SD-WAN Discovery draft, the IDR W=
G
> preferred to keep background material, scenarios, and usage context out o=
f
> the protocol-extension draft and instead reference this SD-WAN usage
> document for that material.
>
> There is precedent for BESS publishing Informational usage/applicability
> documents, such as RFC 8388 on EVPN usage and applicability and RFC 9469 =
on
> EVPN applicability to NVO3. Those documents describe usage of BGP-based
> technologies without defining an entire end-to-end solution.
>
>
>
>
>
> KT> This point was exactly about the fact that there is no end-to-end
> solution for a BGP-based SD-WAN solution being specified or worked on in
> the IETF. Without that, these documents represent efforts that cannot
> achieve a truly standards-based interoperable multi-vendor SD-WAN solutio=
n.
> I am ok if we can agree to disagree on this. I will not block the documen=
t
> on this account given the history of how we got here and the effort put i=
n
> by the authors over the past several years.
>
> [Linda3] Thank you. We understand the concern. Do you think the following
> added sentences at the end of the Introduction (to address your earlier
> comment) makes it clear enough?
>
> *=E2=80=9CThis document is informational and does not specify a complete =
SD-WAN
> solution. Its scope is limited to selected SD-WAN overlay control-plane
> functions, such as distributing edge reachability, WAN-port attributes,
> tunnel-related information, and policy-constrained routes.=E2=80=9D*
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
> <discuss-4> Section 3.1.5 says
>
>
>
>    An SD-WAN edge must use a secure channel, such as TLS following
>
>    BCP195[RFC9325] or Ipsec [RFC4301], to its designated RR for
>
>    exchanging BGP UPDATE messages.
>
>
>
> I assume that IPsec tunnels need to be setup between the edge and
>
> the controller and this tunnel has IP addresses on both ends that are use=
d
>
> to setup a BGP Session over it - i.e., in tunnel mode per RFC4301 with bo=
th
>
> AH and ESP. If so, please clarify. I am unable to find a similar IETF
>
> specification for setting BGP over TLS tunnels. I don't think BCP195 cove=
rs
>
> these aspects. Can you please clarify this use of TLS with an appropriate
>
> reference?
>
>
>
> [Linda] The intent is that the BGP session between the SD-WAN edge and th=
e
> designated RR is carried over a protected transport. When IPsec is used,
> this means an IPsec-protected path between the edge and RR, typically usi=
ng
> IPsec tunnel mode, with IP addresses at both ends used to establish the B=
GP
> TCP session over that protected path. We also agree that BCP195/RFC9325
> gives general TLS/DTLS security recommendations and does not itself speci=
fy
> how to run BGP over TLS. Since there is no RFC that we should rely on her=
e
> for BGP-over-TLS, we will remove the TLS example from this sentence and
> keep the requirement generic, with IPsec as the concrete example. Here is
> the wording change:
>
>
>
> Old:
>
> An SD-WAN edge must use a secure channel, such as TLS following
> BCP195[RFC9325] or Ipsec [RFC4301], to its designated RR for exchanging B=
GP
> UPDATE messages.
>
>
>
> New: Section 3.1.5
>
> An SD-WAN edge must exchange BGP UPDATE messages with its designated RR
> over a protected transport. For example, IPsec [RFC4301] can be used to
> protect the path between the SD-WAN edge and RR, with the BGP TCP session
> established over that protected path. Other mechanisms for protecting the
> edge-to-RR BGP session are outside the scope of this document.
>
>
>
>
>
> KT> Thanks, this addresses my concern. Please run idnits on the document
> and it will put out several warnings related to references that should be
> addressed. e.g., BCP195 reference to be removed.
>
>
>
> KT2> And this aspect too.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Ketan
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Ketan
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
> Linda
>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
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> COMMENT:
>
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>
>
>
> I support the DISCUSS position of Med.
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
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<div dir=3D"ltr">Hi Linda,<div><br></div><div>Thanks for expeditiously addr=
essing most of my technical comments and retaining the reference to=C2=A0dr=
aft-ietf-idr-sdwan-edge-discovery.</div><div><br></div><div>I will update m=
y ballot on this document shortly to change my position from DISCUSS.</div>=
<div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>Ketan</div><div><br></div></div><br><=
div class=3D"gmail_quote gmail_quote_container"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"g=
mail_attr">On Wed, May 27, 2026 at 12:11=E2=80=AFPM Linda Dunbar &lt;<a hre=
f=3D"mailto:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com">linda.dunbar@futurewei.com</a>&gt; =
wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0=
px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div clas=
s=3D"msg-9151632839556189739">





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<div class=3D"m_-9151632839556189739WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ketan, Med, <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I have uploaded revision (v35) that incorporated Ket=
an latest markup and resolutions to Med=E2=80=99s comments: =C2=A0<a href=
=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage/" targ=
et=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-us=
age/</a><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Please let me know if you have more issues. <u></u><=
u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thank you very much, <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Linda<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border-width:1pt medium medium;border-style:solid none none;b=
order-color:rgb(225,225,225) currentcolor currentcolor;padding:3pt 0in 0in"=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Cali=
bri,sans-serif"> Linda Dunbar
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 26, 2026 10:58 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Ketan Talaulikar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ketant.ietf@gmail.com" ta=
rget=3D"_blank">ketant.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> The IESG &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">=
iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;; <a href=3D"mailto:bess-chairs@ietf.org" target=3D"_b=
lank">bess-chairs@ietf.org</a>; BESS &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:bess@ietf.org" t=
arget=3D"_blank">bess@ietf.org</a>&gt;; <a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bess-b=
gp-sdwan-usage.all@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-us=
age.all@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:matthew.bocci@nokia.com" target=3D"=
_blank">matthew.bocci@nokia.com</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: Ketan Talaulikar&#39;s Discuss on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-s=
dwan-usage-32: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)<u></u><u></u></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ketan, <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thanks for the markup. I accepted your suggestion of=
 moving the other published RFC references you identified to Normative refe=
rence.
<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">My hesitation is only with making the in-progress [S=
D-WAN-Discovery] draft normative. That would put this document on hold unti=
l another draft completes, which may take an unknown amount of time. I have=
 seen documents wait more than five
 years after IESG approval because of a normative dependency. I have also s=
een cases where, by the time the dependency was finally cleared, authors ha=
d moved on and it became difficult to complete the final publication update=
s.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">This document has already gone through many years of=
 WG discussion and review. I am very concerned about putting it into a long=
 post-approval hold if the dependency can be avoided through clearer wordin=
g.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">We have revised the text so that the claims stand on=
 their own and [SD-WAN-Discovery] is cited only as one possible approach, n=
ot as a prerequisite. Would you be willing to let [SD-WAN-Discovery] remain=
 Informative if we make that separation
 explicit, while moving the applicable published RFCs to Normative?<u></u><=
u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thank you very much, <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Linda <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<div style=3D"border-width:1pt medium medium;border-style:solid none none;b=
order-color:rgb(225,225,225) currentcolor currentcolor;padding:3pt 0in 0in"=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Cali=
bri,sans-serif"> Ketan Talaulikar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ketant.ietf@gmail.c=
om" target=3D"_blank">ketant.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt;
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 26, 2026 10:03 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Linda Dunbar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com" t=
arget=3D"_blank">linda.dunbar@futurewei.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> The IESG &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">=
iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;; <a href=3D"mailto:bess-chairs@ietf.org" target=3D"_b=
lank">
bess-chairs@ietf.org</a>; BESS &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:bess@ietf.org" target=
=3D"_blank">bess@ietf.org</a>&gt;;
<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage.all@ietf.org" target=3D"_=
blank">draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage.all@ietf.org</a>;
<a href=3D"mailto:matthew.bocci@nokia.com" target=3D"_blank">matthew.bocci@=
nokia.com</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: Ketan Talaulikar&#39;s Discuss on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-s=
dwan-usage-32: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)<u></u><u></u></span></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi Linda,<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thanks for your response and for sharing the propose=
d update. To help us conclude faster, I&#39;ve provided the suggested chang=
es (all of them related to references) in the Word document that you had sh=
ared with tracked changes.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I see that you are already discussing the nuances be=
tween normative and informative references with Med. I concur with Med&#39;=
s observations and (I believe) the changes I&#39;ve suggested align with th=
em.=C2=A0I will let you and Med continue that discussion.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Once this version is posted, I will update my ballot=
.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thanks,<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ketan<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">On Wed, May 27, 2026 at 6:26<span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:Arial,sans-serif">=E2=80=AF</span>AM Linda Dunbar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:=
linda.dunbar@futurewei.com" target=3D"_blank">linda.dunbar@futurewei.com</a=
>&gt; wrote:<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;border-color:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(2=
04,204,204);padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ketan,
<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thank you. Please see the proposed resolution below =
marked by [Linda3].
<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Attached is the Diff file between v34 and the v33.
<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Linda<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div style=3D"border-width:1pt medium medium;border-style:solid none none;p=
adding:3pt 0in 0in;border-color:currentcolor">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Cali=
bri,sans-serif"> Ketan Talaulikar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ketant.ietf@gmail.c=
om" target=3D"_blank">ketant.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt;
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 26, 2026 3:26 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Linda Dunbar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com" t=
arget=3D"_blank">linda.dunbar@futurewei.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> The IESG &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">=
iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;;
<a href=3D"mailto:bess-chairs@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">bess-chairs@ietf.=
org</a>; BESS &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:bess@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">bess@i=
etf.org</a>&gt;;
<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage.all@ietf.org" target=3D"_=
blank">draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage.all@ietf.org</a>;
<a href=3D"mailto:matthew.bocci@nokia.com" target=3D"_blank">matthew.bocci@=
nokia.com</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: Ketan Talaulikar&#39;s Discuss on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-s=
dwan-usage-32: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi Linda,<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Please check inline below for follow-up with KT2. Al=
so, check all the way to the end of the email so you are not missing the pr=
evious conversation where some points were still under
 discussion.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">You can submit the update directly or share the diff=
 if you would like to cross-check or discuss further.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">On Tue, May 26, 2026 at 12:48<span style=3D"font-fam=
ily:Arial,sans-serif">=E2=80=AF</span>PM Linda Dunbar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto=
:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com" target=3D"_blank">linda.dunbar@futurewei.com</=
a>&gt;
 wrote:<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ketan,
<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thank you for the additional comments and suggestion=
s. Please see the proposed resolutions below, marked with [Linda2].
<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Linda<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div style=3D"border-width:1pt medium medium;border-style:solid none none;p=
adding:3pt 0in 0in;border-color:currentcolor">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Cali=
bri,sans-serif"> Ketan Talaulikar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ketant.ietf@gmail.c=
om" target=3D"_blank">ketant.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt;
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 22, 2026 5:46 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Linda Dunbar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com" t=
arget=3D"_blank">linda.dunbar@futurewei.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> The IESG &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">=
iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;;
<a href=3D"mailto:bess-chairs@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">bess-chairs@ietf.=
org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:bess@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">
bess@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage@ietf.o=
rg" target=3D"_blank">
draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:matthew.boc=
ci@nokia.com" target=3D"_blank">
matthew.bocci@nokia.com</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: Ketan Talaulikar&#39;s Discuss on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-s=
dwan-usage-32: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi Linda,<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thanks for the super fast response and for posting t=
he update. Please check inline below for follow-up.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">For the &lt;discuss-1&gt;, I am highlighting a few o=
ther text in the document that I find making asserts and comparisons that d=
o not seem to be substantiated by details or reference.
 Can you please consider rephrasing these sentences?<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Section 5.1 says:<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 =C2=A0In small SD-WAN networks with a modest =
number of nodes,<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0traditional approaches such as the hub-and-spoke model, employ=
ing<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0Next Hop Resolution Protocol (NHRP)[RFC2332] or a centralized =
hub<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0managing edge nodes, including the mapping of local and public=
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0addresses along with tunnel identifiers, has proven effective.=
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0However, for larger SD-WAN networks, with more than 100 nodes =
and<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0encompassing diverse underlays, the conventional approach beco=
mes<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0increasingly complex, error-prone, and difficult to manage.<u>=
</u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">It is OK to reference NHRP as an IETF technology. Ca=
n you cite references to SD-WAN implementations or solutions that use NHRP?=
 This paragraph asserts that NHRP is the conventional
 approach while many SD-WAN solutions exist (that you consider traditional?=
) that do not suffer from any of these challenges. If they do, please subst=
antiate that claim with references. Why compare? Also, &quot;traditional ap=
proach&quot; is unspecified - aren&#39;t there
 SD-WAN solutions that do more than use the hub-and-spoke model? Why not ju=
st state how things are done with BGP?<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">[Linda2] NHRP i=
s referenced because DMVPN-like IPsec/GRE overlay designs use NHRP for tunn=
el endpoint resolution. Some SD-WAN products support or coexist
 with DMVPN-like deployment models; for example, Cisco documentation descri=
bes DMVPN tunnels being configured through Cisco Catalyst SD-WAN Manager. H=
owever, we agree that it may not be appropriate for this document to genera=
lize such vendor-specific deployment
 practices or to rely on vendor implementation references. Therefore, we ca=
n make the following wording change:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u=
></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=E2=80=9CIn small SD-WAN networks with=
 a modest number of nodes, traditional approaches such as the hub-and-spoke=
 model, employing Next Hop Resolution Protocol (NHRP)[RFC2332] or a central=
ized hub managing edge nodes, including the mapping
 of local and public addresses along with tunnel identifiers, has proven ef=
fective. However, for larger SD-WAN networks, with more than 100 nodes and =
encompassing diverse underlays, the conventional approach becomes increasin=
gly complex, error-prone, and difficult
 to manage.=E2=80=9D</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">New:</span><u><=
/u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=E2=80=9CIn small SD-WAN networks w=
ith a modest number of nodes, a hub-and-spoke overlay model, including desi=
gns that use Next Hop Resolution Protocol (NHRP) [RFC2332] for tunnel endpo=
int resolution, can be manageable. In larger SD-WAN
 networks with many edge nodes and diverse underlays, additional mechanisms=
 are often needed to distribute reachability, tunnel endpoint information, =
and policy-related attributes in a scalable and consistent manner. This doc=
ument describes how BGP can be used
 for that purpose.=E2=80=9D</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT2&gt; This text works.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 =C2=A0In summary, BGP combines scalability, r=
obust policy enforcement,<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0interoperability, and centralized security, <b>making it an id=
eal<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0choice</b> for managing SD-WAN overlay networks, particularly =
as they<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0grow in size and complexity.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">BGP is certainly a choice. Can you substantiate that=
 it is an ideal choice without supporting references that analyze the other=
 choices?<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">[Linda2] Good s=
uggestion. The intent of this section is not to prove that BGP is superior =
to every possible SD-WAN control-plane mechanism, but to explain
 why BGP is suitable for the SD-WAN control-plane functions scoped by this =
document. How about the following wording change?
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u=
></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=E2=80=9CIn summary, BGP combines scal=
ability, robust policy enforcement, interoperability, and centralized secur=
ity, making it an ideal choice for managing SD-WAN overlay networks, partic=
ularly as they grow in size and complexity.=E2=80=9D</span><u></u><u></u></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=E2=80=9CIn summary, BGP is well su=
ited to these SD-WAN overlay control-plane functions because it provides st=
andardized mechanisms for scalable route distribution, policy-based route p=
ropagation, VPN membership control using Route Targets,
 and extensible encoding of tunnel-related attributes, which are especially=
 useful as the network grows in size and complexity</span></i><span style=
=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">.=E2=80=9D</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT2&gt; This text also works.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">A related point appears in section 5.1 and also in o=
ther places in this document. There is a comparison between &quot;tradition=
al IPsec VPN&quot; and SD-WAN. I do not understand the motivation
 for such comparisons. Are they not comparing apples and oranges? Is this d=
ocument proposing BGP for traditional IPsec VPNs or for an SD-WAN solution =
that aligns more closely with MEF/Mplify specifications? Why not just state=
 how things are done with BGP?<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">[Linda2] This d=
ocument is about using BGP as the SD-WAN control plane. Here, =E2=80=9Ctrad=
itional=E2=80=9D was intended to refer to SD-WAN deployments that use IPsec
 VPN tunnels for the data plane and proprietary mechanisms for the control =
plane. We agree that the term is ambiguous and will replace it with more sp=
ecific wording, such as =E2=80=9Cproprietary SD-WAN control-plane mechanism=
s.=E2=80=9D</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT2&gt; Thanks. Replacing &quot;traditional&quot; wi=
th the specific types of VPN/SD-WAN would help.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u=
></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Please search for &quot;traditional&quot; in the doc=
ument. You will see many similar comparisons and assertions that I am unsur=
e are substantiated but more importantly, they are probably
 unnecessary.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">[Linda2] Agree.=
 We have searched for =E2=80=9Ctraditional=E2=80=9D throughout the document=
.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Here are the de=
tailed changes:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u=
></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Section 3.2:</s=
pan><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u=
></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old :
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">A Homogeneous Encrypted SD-WAN shares =
certain similarities with</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 traditional IPsec VPN. Ho=
wever, unlike IPsec VPNs, which are</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 typically deployed in a p=
oint-to-point fashion among a limited</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 number of nodes, SD-WAN n=
etworks can comprise a large number of</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 edge nodes, all centrally=
 managed by a controller responsible for</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 configurations and polici=
es across the network</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">A Homogeneous Encrypted SD-WAN uses=
 IPsec tunnels to protect traffic between SD-WAN edges. The SD-WAN overlay =
may include many edge nodes, with configuration and policy information mana=
ged by an SD-WAN controller.</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u=
></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Section 4.3:</s=
pan><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">In a BGP-controlled SD-WAN, BGP UPDATE=
 messages could be extended</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 to propagate IPsec-relate=
d attributes for each SD-WAN edge [SD-</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 WAN-Discovery]. This appr=
oach allows peers to receive and apply</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 compatible cryptographic =
parameters distributed over a secure</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 channel between the SD-WA=
N edge and its BGP RR, thereby</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 simplifying IPsec tunnel =
establishment and reducing reliance on</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0=C2=A0 <span style=3D"background=
:yellow">traditional</span> IKEv2 negotiation [RFC7296].</span><u></u><u></=
u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">In a BGP-controlled SD-WAN, BGP UPD=
ATE messages could be extended to propagate IPsec-related attributes for ea=
ch SD-WAN edge [SD-WAN-Discovery]. These attributes allow SD-WAN edges to r=
eceive compatible IPsec parameters from the
 RR over a protected BGP session. By leveraging the authenticated and autho=
rized relationship between each SD-WAN edge and the RR, this approach can s=
implify IPsec tunnel establishment and reduce or eliminate the need for sep=
arate per-peer IKEv2 authentication
 between SD-WAN edges, depending on the deployment model [RFC7296] (see Sec=
tion 5.1 and Section 7).</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Section 5.1:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Unlike <span style=3D"background:yello=
w">traditional</span> IPsec VPN where IPsec tunnels between two edge nodes =
are treated as independent parallel links requiring duplicated control plan=
e messages for load sharing, BGP in an SD-WAN
 context can associate multiple service flows with shared tunnel parameters=
, reducing repeated signaling.
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">When an IGP such as OSPF is run ove=
r IPsec tunnel interfaces, routing adjacencies are typically established pe=
r tunnel. In a BGP-controlled SD-WAN context, multiple service flows can be=
 associated with shared tunnel parameters,
 reducing repeated per-tunnel control-plane configuration.</span></i><u></u=
><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Section 6.1.1:<=
/span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old:</span><u><=
/u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Instead of running IGP within each IPs=
ec tunnel, as is common in
<span style=3D"background:yellow">traditional</span> IPsec VPN, the BGP RR =
can propagate the client route UPDATE messages to authorized SD-WAN edges b=
ased on configured policies.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">In a BGP-controlled SD-WAN, the BGP=
 RR can propagate the client route UPDATE messages to authorized SD-WAN edg=
es based on configured policies.</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Section 8:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">The primary operational difference bet=
ween SD-WAN deployments and
<span style=3D"background:yellow">traditional</span> BGP-based VPNs is that=
 SD-WAN edge nodes often include Internet-facing WAN ports,</span><u></u><u=
></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">The primary operational difference =
between SD-WAN deployments and
<span style=3D"background:yellow">classic</span> BGP-based VPNs is that SD-=
WAN edge nodes often include Internet-facing WAN ports,</span></i><u></u><u=
></u></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT2&gt; All of these are good. For the last one, ins=
tead of &quot;classic&quot;, perhaps you are referring to BGP L3VPN and/or =
EVPN? If so, please provide informative reference to those specific
 RFCs?<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">[Linda3] Ok, r=
emoved =E2=80=9Cclassic=E2=80=9D and added the reference:</span><u></u><u><=
/u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">=C2=A0</span><=
u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:10.9pt">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">A primary operational difference b=
etween SD-WAN deployments and BGP/MPLS IP VPNs [RFC4364][RFC4659]is that SD=
-WAN edge nodes often include Internet-facing WAN ports, which introduce ad=
ditional security, filtering, and policy-enforcement
 requirements that are not typically present in BGP/MPLS IP VPN environment=
s.</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Section 6.1.1 says<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0 =C2=A0Instead of running IGP within each IPse=
c tunnel, as is common in<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0traditional IPsec VPN, the BGP RR can propagate the client rou=
te<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0UPDATE messages to authorized SD-WAN edges based on configured=
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0policies. The SD-WAN edges use BGP attributes-such as the Tunn=
el<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0Encapsulation Attribute and associated Color values-to associa=
te<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0received client routes with the appropriate IPsec Security<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0Associations (SAs), thereby eliminating the need for manual<br=
>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0configuration of tunnel endpoints and service policies on each=
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0edge node.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">SD-WAN is a rich service with several policies beyon=
d tunnel endpoints and their security parameters.=C2=A0Also, most SD-WAN so=
lutions employ a high degree of automation, resulting in
 minimal manual configuration. Is the claim of &quot;eliminating the need f=
or manual configuration&quot; substantiated? Does everything required for t=
raffic flow management, steering and service configuration arrive via the B=
GP protocol without any manual configuration
 or provisioning outside of BGP?<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">[Linda2] Agree.=
=C2=A0 Section 5.1 has been revised to explain the rationale more narrowly:=
 =E2=80=9CBGP is well suited to these SD-WAN overlay control-plane function=
s
 because it provides standardized mechanisms, =E2=80=A6.=E2=80=9D; Section =
6.1.1 has also removed the comparison with running IGP within each IPsec tu=
nnel..=E2=80=9D .=C2=A0 The intended point is narrower: BGP can distribute =
client reachability and tunnel-association information using
 standardized mechanisms,...</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u=
></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">Here is the upd=
ated paragraph:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,112,192)">In a BGP-controlled SD-WAN, the BGP=
 RR can propagate client route UPDATE messages to authorized SD-WAN edges b=
ased on configured policies. The SD-WAN edges use BGP attributes, such as t=
he Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute and associated
 Color values, to associate received client routes with the appropriate IPs=
ec Security Associations (SAs), thereby reducing per-edge configuration of =
tunnel endpoint associations. Other SD-WAN service policies, traffic-steeri=
ng rules, and device-specific parameters
 may still be provisioned by the SD-WAN controller or local configuration.<=
/span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT2&gt; This is good as well. Thanks.<u></u><u></u><=
/p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">On Fri, May 22, 2026 at 12:15<span style=3D"font-fam=
ily:Arial,sans-serif">=E2=80=AF</span>AM Linda Dunbar &lt;<a href=3D"mailto=
:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com" target=3D"_blank">linda.dunbar@futurewei.com</=
a>&gt;
 wrote:<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">Ketan,
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">Thank you very much for the comments and the suggestions.
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">Please see below of the proposed resolutions marked by [Linda] an=
d let us know if they are acceptable.
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">Thank you, Linda</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">-----Original Message-----<br>
From: Ketan Talaulikar via Datatracker &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.o=
rg" target=3D"_blank">noreply@ietf.org</a>&gt;
<br>
Sent: Thursday, May 21, 2026 7:00 AM<br>
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ef=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">
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ci@nokia.com" target=3D"_blank">
matthew.bocci@nokia.com</a><br>
Subject: Ketan Talaulikar&#39;s Discuss on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-=
32: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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ns-serif">draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-32: Discuss</span><u></u><u></u><=
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ns-serif">Please refer to
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t-positions/" target=3D"_blank">
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ns-serif">for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT posi=
tions.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found her=
e:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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ns-serif"><a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-s=
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om/?url=3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-bess-bgp-sd=
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f94413745508deb7414751%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C6391496=
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ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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ns-serif">-----------------------------------------------------------------=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">DISCUSS:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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ns-serif">-----------------------------------------------------------------=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">Thanks to the authors and the WG for their work on this document.=
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">I have a few high-level aspects in this document that I would lik=
e to discuss.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">&lt;discuss-1&gt; The abstract of this document says:</span><u></=
u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 This document explores the complexities involved in =
managing large</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 scale Software Defined WAN (SD-WAN) overlay networks=
, along with</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 various SD-WAN scenarios. Its objective is to illust=
rate how a</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 BGP-based control plane can effectively manage these=
 overlay</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 networks by distributing edge service reachability i=
nformation,</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 WAN port attributes, and underlay path details, ther=
eby minimizing</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 manual provisioning.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">To my knowledge there are SD-WAN solutions from several vendors t=
hat are</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">widely deployed today. Some of them use IETF protocols for specif=
ic</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">functionalities while others use proprietary mechanisms (here I a=
m not</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">referring to IPSec or TLS but routing protocols). This text (and =
a few</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">similar in the body of the document) gives the impression of comp=
arison</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">between a BGP-based solution that is not fully specified (not eve=
n the</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">framework is specified) in this document against solutions deploy=
ed out</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">there.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">As easy way to address this would be to rephrase such text to not=
 make</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">claims or comparisons. Perhaps just plainly state how use of BGP =
can</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">potentially replace other proprietary mechanisms used in SD-WAN s=
olution?</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">E.g., the first sentence is problematic since it can be read as e=
xisting</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">solutions have complexities that are solved by BGP without any su=
pporting</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">evidence or evaluation of those other solutions.</span><u></u><u>=
</u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">[Linda] Very good point. How about the follo=
wing change for the Abstract?
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><i><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">Its objective is to illustrate how a BGP-=
based control plane can effectively manage these overlay
 networks...</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">New:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><i><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">Its objective is to illustrate how a BGP-=
based control plane can be used to manage these overlay
 networks...</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">Add the following sentence at the end of the=
 Abstract:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><i><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">In such deployments, BGP can provide a st=
andards-based mechanism for distributing information that
 may otherwise be exchanged using proprietary SD-WAN control-plane mechanis=
ms.</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT&gt; Thanks. That helps. However the first sentenc=
e still remains. How about the following abstract?<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
=C2=A0 =C2=A0This document illustrates how a BGP-based control plane can be
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0used to manage large scale Software Defined WAN (SD-WAN) overl=
ay<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0networks by distributing edge service reachability information=
,<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0WAN port attributes, and underlay path details, thereby minimi=
zing<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0manual provisioning. In such deployments, BGP can provide a<br=
>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0standards-based mechanism for distributing information that ma=
y<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0otherwise be exchanged using proprietary SD-WAN control-plane<=
br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0mechanisms.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">[Linda3] Thank=
s for the suggestion. Changed. Sorry that I missed it yesterday. =C2=A0</sp=
an><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT&gt; This change along with an appropriate rephras=
ing of the similar issues identifed at the top of this email will address t=
his point.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT2&gt; Is this suggested abstract ok?<u></u><u></u>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">[Linda3] Yes. =
Thank you. =C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
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e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
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<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">&lt;discuss-2&gt; Introduction section says:</span><u></u><u></u>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 This document captures the SD-WAN scenarios, control=
-plane</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 behaviors, and forwarding considerations that motiva=
te current and</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 future IETF work on SD-WAN. Publishing this material=
 as an RFC</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 provides a stable, citable foundation for related pr=
otocol</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 specifications and ensures a shared understanding of=
 the problem</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 space across the industry.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">As mentioned in the previous point, there are multiple SD-WAN sol=
utions</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">that have been developed by various vendors using IETF technologi=
es</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">like BGP (but with proprietary extensions) or entirely proprietar=
y</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">solutions. AFAIK, none of these solutions support interoperabilit=
y between</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">SD-WAN gateways and controllers from different vendors. Please co=
rrect</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">me if I am wrong. So, I wonder where and how the standardization =
of SD-WAN</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">at the IETF is happening to enable such interoperability that is =
after all</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">the purpose of the IETF. The BGP extensions are but a small porti=
on of what</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">an SD-WAN solution entails. Do the claims made in that text hold?=
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">Why not just say &quot;This document captures the SD-WAN scenario=
s, control-plane</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">behaviors, and forwarding considerations using BGP.&quot; or some=
thing like that?</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">[Linda] Thanks for the suggestion. We will t=
ake your suggestion, make the following wording change:</span><u></u><u></u=
></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">This document captures the SD-WAN scenarios,=
 control-plane behaviors, and forwarding considerations
 that motivate current and future IETF work on SD-WAN. Publishing this mate=
rial as an RFC provides a stable, citable foundation for related protocol s=
pecifications and ensures a shared understanding of the problem space acros=
s the industry. Although BGP and
 IPsec are mature technologies, applying them to SD-WAN introduces challeng=
es such as scalability, segmentation, and multi-homing. By documenting how =
these mechanisms are used in SD-WAN deployments, this document enables cons=
istent interpretations and supports
 interoperability without defining new protocols.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><i><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">This document captures SD-WAN scenarios, =
control-plane behaviors, and forwarding considerations
 when BGP is used as the SD-WAN overlay control plane. Publishing this mate=
rial as an RFC provides a stable, citable foundation for related protocol s=
pecifications that use BGP for SD-WAN networks and helps establish a shared=
 understanding of the problem space
 and assumptions described in this document. This document is informational=
 and does not specify a complete SD-WAN solution.</span></i><u></u><u></u><=
/p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT&gt; Thanks. Just one point and suggestion below:<=
u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
s/related protocol specifications that use BGP for SD-WAN networks/related =
protocol specifications [draft-ietf-idr-sdwan-edge-discovery]
 that use BGP for SD-WAN networks</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">[Linda3] To av=
oid creating an unintended dependency on a specific protocol-extension draf=
t, we prefer to keep this sentence generic rather than naming
 [SD-WAN-Discovery] here. This document is Informational and does not speci=
fy the BGP extensions defined in [SD-WAN-Discovery]. The purpose of this pa=
ragraph is only to state that the usage document provides shared context. H=
ow about the following wording change:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:10.9pt">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">=E2=80=9C<i>Publishing this material =
as an RFC establishes a shared understanding of the SD-WAN problem space an=
d deployment assumptions and can assist with future protocol development fo=
r BGP-based SD-WAN networks.=E2=80=9D</i></span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Also, for the text in section 5.3, doesn&#39;t=C2=A0=
draft-ietf-idr-sdwan-edge-discovery become a normative reference?<u></u><u>=
</u></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT2&gt; Have these changes been considered?<u></u><u=
></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">[Linda3] This =
document is Informational and does not require implementation of [SD-WAN-Di=
scovery] to understand the SD-WAN scenarios or the BGP usage
 described here. [SD-WAN-Discovery] is cited only as an example of one poss=
ible protocol extension/encoding in Section 5.1 and Section 5.2. To make it=
 clearer, we can make the following wording change:</span><u></u><u></u></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">=C2=A0</span><=
u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">Section 5.1:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">In networks with multiple IPsec tunne=
ls between SD-WAN edges, BGP can simplify tunnel management by using the SD=
-WAN edge discovery mechanism defined in [SD-WAN-Discovery] to advertise WA=
N-port properties and IPsec-related parameters.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:21.85pt">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">In networks with multiple IPsec tu=
nnels between SD-WAN edges, BGP can simplify tunnel management by advertisi=
ng WAN-port properties and IPsec-related parameters. One possible approach =
for carrying such information is described
 in [SD-WAN-Discovery].</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">Section 5.2:</=
span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">=C2=A0Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:21.85pt">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">In a BGP-controlled Homogeneous Encry=
pted SD-WAN, an SD-WAN edge (i.e., C-PE) could advertise both its attached =
client routes and associated IPsec tunnel parameters using BGP UPDATE messa=
ges, potentially within in a single message
 that includes the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute [SD-WAN-Discovery].</span=
><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:21.85pt">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:21.85pt">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">In a BGP-controlled Homogeneous En=
crypted SD-WAN, an SD-WAN edge (i.e., C-PE) could advertise both its attach=
ed client routes and associated IPsec tunnel parameters using BGP UPDATE me=
ssages. One possible approach using the Tunnel
 Encapsulation Attribute is described in [SD-WAN-Discovery].</span></i><u><=
/u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:21.85pt">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">=C2=A0</span></i><u></u><u></u></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">the BGP UPDATE message from C-PE2 to =
RR can include the client routes in the MP-NLRI Path Attribute, and can use=
 the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute [SD-WAN-Discovery] to convey the parame=
ters needed to associate those routes with
 the appropriate IPsec tunnel.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:0.5in">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">New:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:21.85pt">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">the BGP UPDATE message from C-PE2 =
to RR can include the client routes in the MP-NLRI Path Attribute and can u=
se BGP attributes to convey the parameters needed to associate those routes=
 with the appropriate IPsec tunnel. One possible
 approach using the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute is described in [SD-WAN-=
Discovery].</span></i><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor windowtext">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">&lt;discuss-3&gt; In continuation of the previous point. There is=
 no SD-WAN WG that</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">is chartered today to study and undertake the work necessary for =
a standards</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">based open and interoperable SD-WAN solution. Without that in pla=
ce, I do not</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">understand the value or benefit of publication of this document v=
ia the IETF</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">track. It could as well be via ISE?</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">[Linda] This document is limited to BGP usag=
e for SD-WAN overlay control-plane scenarios; it is not
 intended to define a complete SD-WAN solution. The document has been discu=
ssed in BESS for several years and has reached BESS WG consensus. Moving it=
 to the Independent Stream at this stage would disregard the WG reviews and=
 consensus already achieved.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">This document also serves an important role =
for the related IDR work. During the multi-year discussion
 of the SD-WAN Discovery draft, the IDR WG preferred to keep background mat=
erial, scenarios, and usage context out of the protocol-extension draft and=
 instead reference this SD-WAN usage document for that material.</span><u><=
/u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">There is precedent for BESS publishing Infor=
mational usage/applicability documents, such as RFC 8388
 on EVPN usage and applicability and RFC 9469 on EVPN applicability to NVO3=
. Those documents describe usage of BGP-based technologies without defining=
 an entire end-to-end solution.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT&gt; This point was exactly about the fact that th=
ere is no end-to-end solution for a BGP-based SD-WAN solution being specifi=
ed or worked on in the IETF. Without that, these documents
 represent efforts that cannot achieve a truly standards-based interoperabl=
e multi-vendor SD-WAN solution. I am ok if we can agree to disagree on this=
. I will not block the document on this account given the history of how we=
 got here and the effort put in
 by the authors over the past several years.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">[Linda3] Thank=
 you. We understand the concern. Do you think the following added sentences=
 at the end of the Introduction (to address your earlier comment)
 makes it clear enough? </span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:10.95pt">
<i><span style=3D"color:rgb(112,48,160)">=E2=80=9CThis document is informat=
ional and does not specify a complete SD-WAN solution. Its scope is limited=
 to selected SD-WAN overlay control-plane functions, such as distributing e=
dge reachability, WAN-port attributes, tunnel-related
 information, and policy-constrained routes.=E2=80=9D</span></i><u></u><u><=
/u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<blockquote style=3D"border-width:medium medium medium 1pt;border-style:non=
e none none solid;padding:0in 0in 0in 6pt;margin:5pt 0in 5pt 4.8pt;border-c=
olor:currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor rgb(204,204,204)">
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">&lt;discuss-4&gt; Section 3.1.5 says</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 An SD-WAN edge must use a secure channel, such as TL=
S following</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 BCP195[RFC9325] or Ipsec [RFC4301], to its designate=
d RR for</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0=C2=A0 exchanging BGP UPDATE messages.</span><u></u><u></u>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">I assume that IPsec tunnels need to be setup between the edge and=
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">the controller and this tunnel has IP addresses on both ends that=
 are used</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">to setup a BGP Session over it - i.e., in tunnel mode per RFC4301=
 with both</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">AH and ESP. If so, please clarify. I am unable to find a similar =
IETF</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">specification for setting BGP over TLS tunnels. I don&#39;t think=
 BCP195 covers</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">these aspects. Can you please clarify this use of TLS with an app=
ropriate</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">reference?</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">[Linda] The intent is that the BGP session b=
etween the SD-WAN edge and the designated RR is carried
 over a protected transport. When IPsec is used, this means an IPsec-protec=
ted path between the edge and RR, typically using IPsec tunnel mode, with I=
P addresses at both ends used to establish the BGP TCP session over that pr=
otected path. We also agree that
 BCP195/RFC9325 gives general TLS/DTLS security recommendations and does no=
t itself specify how to run BGP over TLS. Since there is no RFC that we sho=
uld rely on here for BGP-over-TLS, we will remove the TLS example from this=
 sentence and keep the requirement
 generic, with IPsec as the concrete example. Here is the wording change:</=
span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">Old:
</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">An SD-WAN edge must use a secure channel, su=
ch as TLS following BCP195[RFC9325] or Ipsec [RFC4301],
 to its designated RR for exchanging BGP UPDATE messages.</span><u></u><u><=
/u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif;color:rgb(0,112,192)">An SD-WAN edge must exchange BGP UPDATE mess=
ages with its designated RR over a protected transport.
 For example, IPsec [RFC4301] can be used to protect the path between the S=
D-WAN edge and RR, with the BGP TCP session established over that protected=
 path. Other mechanisms for protecting the edge-to-RR BGP session are outsi=
de the scope of this document.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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ns-serif">=C2=A0</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT&gt; Thanks, this addresses my concern. Please run=
 idnits on the document and it will put out several warnings related to ref=
erences that should be addressed. e.g., BCP195 reference
 to be removed.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">KT2&gt; And this aspect too.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thanks,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ketan<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thanks,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ketan<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">Linda</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sa=
ns-serif">I support the DISCUSS position of Med.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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