[bess] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07

Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 31 March 2019 20:18 UTC

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Subject: [bess] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07

Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review result: Ready

I read the document and think it is ready. IDNits warnings and comments are
easily/automatically fixed when new version is submitted.

I only have few editorial nits/suggestions.
* Section 5.1 says "Assuming the below specified network topology.." while it
could also use an exact reference to Figure 1. * Section 5 is written so that
it assumed the reader has already read Section 6. Maybe swapping Sections 5 and
6 order would make sense?

[bess] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-bess… Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker
Re: [bess] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-… Ravi Singh