[bess] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree-13: (with COMMENT)
Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net> Mon, 11 September 2017 13:19 UTC
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Subject: [bess] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree-13: (with COMMENT)
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Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree-13: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Mostly editorial comment: Reading sections 3 and 4 it not clear to me if this is providing an actual implementation specification or just reasoning. If the former is indented I would recommend to use more active and normative language. Also I would recommend to have section 5 before 3 and 4 because they use these new flags/fields. Please also consider the comments provided by the new gen-art review (thanks Dale!) which probably go in the same direction and suggest some good concrete improvements.
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