[bess] Re: Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-fast-df-recovery-09: (with COMMENT)

Luc André Burdet <laburdet.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 19 August 2024 21:36 UTC

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From: Luc André Burdet <laburdet.ietf@gmail.com>
To: Jim Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thanks Jim for your review, I have updated the document in -10


Regards,
Luc André

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From: Jim Guichard via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Date: Monday, August 19, 2024 at 08:53
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Subject: [bess] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-fast-df-recovery-09: (with COMMENT)
Jim Guichard has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-fast-df-recovery-09: No Objection

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Thank you for this document. No substantive comments. However, nits throws up
the following so please review.

  ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC8584]), which it
     shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the
     documents in question.

  -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC8584, but the
     abstract doesn't seem to directly say this.  It does mention RFC8584
     though, so this could be OK.



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