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Thanks Jim for your review, I have updated the document in -10


Regards,
Luc Andr=E9

Luc Andr=E9 Burdet |  Cisco  |  laburdet.ietf@gmail.com  |  Tel: +1 613 254=
 4814


From: Jim Guichard via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Date: Monday, August 19, 2024 at 08:53
To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: [bess] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-fast-df=
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COMMENT:
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Thank you for this document. No substantive comments. However, nits throws =
up
the following so please review.

  ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC8584]), which it
     shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the
     documents in question.

  -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC8584, but the
     abstract doesn't seem to directly say this.  It does mention RFC8584
     though, so this could be OK.



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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:12.0pt">Than=
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<b>Date: </b>Monday, August 19, 2024 at 08:53<br>
<b>To: </b>The IESG &lt;iesg@ietf.org&gt;<br>
<b>Cc: </b>draft-ietf-bess-evpn-fast-df-recovery@ietf.org &lt;draft-ietf-be=
ss-evpn-fast-df-recovery@ietf.org&gt;, bess-chairs@ietf.org &lt;bess-chairs=
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 &lt;matthew.bocci@nokia.com&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>[bess] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-=
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Thank you for this document. No substantive comments. However, nits throws =
up<br>
the following so please review.<br>
<br>
&nbsp; ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC8584]), which it<br=
>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; shouldn't.&nbsp; Please replace those with straigh=
t textual mentions of the<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; documents in question.<br>
<br>
&nbsp; -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC8584, bu=
t the<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; abstract doesn't seem to directly say this.&nbsp; =
It does mention RFC8584<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; though, so this could be OK.<br>
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