Re: [bess] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8584 (5900)

John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net> Tue, 12 November 2019 15:37 UTC

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From: John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net>
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This should be rejected as well.

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> On Nov 12, 2019, at 5:32 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8584,
> "Framework for Ethernet VPN Designated Forwarder Election Extensibility".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5900__;!8WoA6RjC81c!TpKkmNpLw0IxSEE-fJ1n-SvT2U3XV1WV-yf10zT1tAutFg-Xf1AC-VLo5hXdcR4$ 
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Frank Lu <frank.lu@realtek.com>
> 
> Section: 1.1
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> BD: Broadcast Domain.  An EVI may be comprised of one BD
>      (VLAN-based or VLAN Bundle services) or multiple BDs (VLAN-aware
>      Bundle services).
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> BD: Broadcast Domain.  An EVI may be comprised of one BD
>      (VLAN-based) or multiple BDs (VLAN Bundle services 
> or VLAN-aware Bundle services).
> 
> Notes
> -----
> By definition, tgere
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8584 (draft-ietf-bess-evpn-df-election-framework-09)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Framework for Ethernet VPN Designated Forwarder Election Extensibility
> Publication Date    : April 2019
> Author(s)           : J. Rabadan, Ed., S. Mohanty, Ed., A. Sajassi, J. Drake, K. Nagaraj, S. Sathappan
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : BGP Enabled Services
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG