[bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 22 November 2021 09:35 UTC

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Subject: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2021-11-22
IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-24
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with editorial
comment.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
An editorial comment: I suggest that the introduction section will start with
the description of the protocol. it can use the text from the abstract with the
text from the last two paragraph of the introspection section that should move
to the start of the section. The definitions / terminology should follow or be
in a sub section.

[bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess… Roni Even via Datatracker
Re: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ketan Talaulikar