Re: [bess] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-mcast-11: (with COMMENT)

["Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Erik,

Thanks for your review and comments.
I've fixed two nits in the .xml source - it will be posted when the pre-IETF119 quiescence period is over.
One clarifying point below with the zzh> prefix.


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# Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-mcast-11 CC @ekline

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## Comments

* Very clearly written, I thought, thank you.

## Nits

### S1.1

* "address of addresses"
  "address or addresses", I suspect

### S1.3

* Consider "he" -> "they"

Zzh> It is about "a particular tenant", so "he" should be fine?

          For instance, if a particular tenant has n BDs among
          which he wants to send IP multicast traffic ...

zzh> Thanks!
Zzh> Jeffrey

### Appendix A.

* "intreface" -> "interface"