Re: [bess] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: (with COMMENT)

"Ali Sajassi (sajassi)" <sajassi@cisco.com> Tue, 22 January 2019 08:59 UTC

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From: "Ali Sajassi (sajassi)" <sajassi@cisco.com>
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [bess] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: (with COMMENT)
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Ben,
Thanks for your review and your comments. Please refer to my replies below marked with "AS>".

On 1/9/19, 1:28 PM, "Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:

    Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: No Objection
    
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    Thanks for the work on this.
    
    I support Alissa's discuss.
    
    §2:
    - The 2119/8174 keywords in this section are not used according to the RFC
    2119/RFC 8174 definitions. The RFCs talk about requirements on implementations
    to achieve interoperability. This speaks of requirements for the standards
    process. If the working group prefers to keep the use of keywords in this
    section, please add some additional text to the 2119/8174 boilerplate to
    explain the usage. (My other comments on the section assume that the normative
    keywords will remain.)
    
    - Req 2:  "The solution MUST require no changes..."
    I suggest "MUST NOT require changes"

AS> Changed it to: "must not require any changes to ..."
    
    - Req 5: This doesn't seem to state a solution requirement; rather, it
    describes an action that VPN instances may take. Is the solution requirement to
    allow this behavior?
    
AS>   moved the 2nd part of the paragraph to the solution description under sections 3.2 and 4.2.

Regards,
Ali