[bess] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-11

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 09 April 2017 05:57 UTC

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Subject: [bess] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-11

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-10
IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13

Summary:

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

In section 1 second paragraph "[RFC7432] provides the ability " looks
like the reference is not a link to RFC7432.

[bess] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bess-… Roni Even