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Re: [bess] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: (with COMMENT)

"Ali Sajassi (sajassi)" <sajassi@cisco.com> Tue, 22 January 2019 07:30 UTC

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From: "Ali Sajassi (sajassi)" <sajassi@cisco.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [bess] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: (with COMMENT)
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Alvaro,

Thanks for your review and your comments. Please refer to my replies below marked with "AS>".

On 1/7/19, 9:30 AM, "Alvaro Retana" <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

    Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: No Objection
    
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    It would be very nice to have references to (PBB-)EVPN and (PBB-)VPLS in the
    introduction.  I think that all of these references should be Normative because
    they are "documents that must be read to understand or implement the
    technology".  It looks like the references are made later in the text...but a
    couple are listed as only Informative.

AS> All the EVPN and VPLS RFCs are listed in the normative section. RFC7041 which is about PBB-VPLS was in informative section which is now move to normative.
    
    I don't think that the use of rfc2119 language in §2 (Requirements) is
    appropriate because (1) there isn't any Normative action from the requirements,
    and (2) these are resolved later in this document.

AS> change them to lower case.
    
    I agree with others (Genart, Opsdir) in that this document reads more like a
    BCP or even an Informational document.

AS> I added a sentence to the abstract and introduction to explain why this drat is intended to be "standard".
    
    [nit] s/(PBB-VPLS) solutions (PBB-)VPLS./(PBB-VPLS) solutions.

AS> done.

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