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Hi,

As shepherd of this document, please find below some comments that I have:

Overall comments:

-          Please add a section that contains all the abbreviations expansi=
ons: that may help non expert people to follow the acronyms without looking=
 for the first reference in the text.

-          I usually like figures. For the intro, it may be wonderful to bu=
ild a figure that reminds the existing S-PMSI/Leaf A-D procedure. So withou=
t reading the text, we can remember how it works.

-          The interAS case may also be better with a Figure and an example=
 (or couples of).

Introduction:

"By originating one of these BGP routes, an ingress node advertises that
   it is transmitting a particular multicast flow."
[SLI] Is "is transmitting" correct ? Can't we have situations where an S-PM=
SI route is/was advertised but no traffic is flowing (no yet started or swi=
tched, or stopped).


"Now

   suppose that the ingress node wants explicit tracking for each

   individual flow that it transmits (following the procedures of

   [RFC6625] on that P-tunnel."

[SLI] Missing ")"





"This allows the

   ingress node to determine the set of egress nodes that are receiving

   flows from the ingress node."

[SLI] I think the Leaf A-D tells that there is a receiver interested by the=
 flow, but does not tell that it actually receives it.





"   Howver, this procedure requires several clarifications:"

[SLI] There is a typo s/Howver/However/



"The procedures of [RFC6625] do not clearly state how to handle an

      S-PMSI A-D route if its NLRI contains wild cards, but its PTA

      specifies "no tunnel info"."



[SLI] I quickly ran over RFC6625, it does not mention anything on explicit =
tracking or Leaf A-D routes. So we assume that RFC6513/6514 only applies he=
re.





"   *  The explicit tracking procedures do not allow an ingress node

         to "see" past the boundaries of the segmentation domain.



         This particular problem is not further addressed in this

         revision of this document.

"

[SLI] Do you plan to address it ? Or do we now consider it as out of scope ?







Section 2:

"Prior specifications define one flag in the PTA, the "Leaf Info

   Required" (LIR) flag, that is used for explicit tracking."



[SLI] Please point to the right reference



"If the LIR-pF flag is set in a given PTA, the LIR flag of that PTA

   SHOULD also be set."

[SLI] Why not using a MUST ?



"one forces a

   a response to be sent an egress node that does not support LIR-pF"

[SLI] Is there a missing word like 'sent by an egress node" ?







Section 3:

"The definition of "match for reception" in [RFC6625] is hereby

   modified as follows:"



[SLI] Please point to the section that you are updating.

In addition, section 3.2 of RFC6625 contains multiple if then else conditio=
ns for each cases (C-S,C-G) and (C-*,C-G). Please give some precision in wh=
ere do you want to insert your new statement in this processing sequence. I=
 guess it is at the beginning.





"When finding the "match for reception" for a given (C-S,C-G) or

      (C-*,C-G), ignore any S-PMSI A-D route that has no PTA, or whose

      PTA specifying "no tunnel information"."
[SLI] I would be in favor to introduce a normative statement here.


"We also introduce a new notion: the "match for tracking".  This

   differs from the "match for reception" as follows:"

[SLI] It would be better to give a definition of the "match for tracking" b=
efore giving the rules. Here you're explaining only the rules, not the diff=
erence in the meaning. Wouldn't it be easier to tell that the implementatio=
n MUST consider only the S-PMSI A-D routes that have a LIR flag and/or LR-p=
F flag set and then run the same rules as the RFC6625. Why do you want to h=
ave S-PMSI routes with PTA and LIR unset in your route list for "match for =
tracking" ? You need to take care here on your text proposal as one of your=
 previous statement updates the RFC6625 and the match reception procedure, =
so the rules to be applied are the original one from RFC6625 and not the up=
dated one.





"   Also note that if a match for tracking does not have the LIR flag or

   the LIR-pF flag set, no explicit tracking information will be

   generated.  See Section 5."

[SLI] Again I do not see the value added of keeping such route as a match f=
or tracking as there is no tracking requested.





Section 4:

"Such a route could be an

       I-PMSI A-D route, a (C-*,C-G1) S-PMSI A-D route, a (C-S1,C-*)

       S-PMSI A-D route, or a (C-*,C-*) S-PMSI A-D route. "

[SLI] Is per flow explicit tracking also required for I-PMSI ? I do not see=
 it listed in the goals of the doc ? The goal was to address wildcards S-PM=
SI AD routes.



"Further, if the ingress node originates a wildcard S-PMSI A-D
       route carrying a PTA specifying the tunnel to be used for
       carrying (C-S1,C-G1) traffic, and if that PTA has the LIR-pF bit
       set, then explicit tracking for (C-S1,C-G1) is requested by that
       S-PMSI A-D route.  Thus the ingress node SHOULD NOT originate a
       (C-S1,C-G1) S-PMSI A-D route whose PTA specifies "no tunnel
       info"; such a route would not provide any additional
       functionality."

[SLI] I do not fully understand this text in the context of your procedure =
1. which deals with an origination of an (C-S1,C-G1) S-PMSI A-D route (no w=
ildcard). As I understand the procedure for the wildcard is defined in 2.







"2. The following procedure can be used if (and only if) it is known
       that the egress nodes support the optional LIR-pF flag."



I have some issue with this sentence. It does not seem to be normative as t=
here is no normative statement. However I understand it as a critical thing=
 ("and only if" !) so it may require at least a SHOULD.

Then the issue I see is that this knowledge does not come from the protocol=
, so it sounds important to me to highlight the impact of a mistake.



BUT, reading the section 5. I understand that it is not as critical as it s=
eems as the receiver will ignore simply the LIR-pF flag and apply the stand=
ard procedure (LIR set).

Please clarify the criticity to have or not this knowledge.





"       To terminate explicit tracking that has been initiated by an
       S-PMSI A-D route whose PTA specifies a tunnel, the ingress node
       re-originates the route without the LIR flag set"

[SLI] Do we also need to clear the LIR-pf ? It would make sense to do so.



"If the match for tracking has LIR set and if either (a) the
       egress node does not support LIR-pF, or (b) LIR-pF is not set,
       then the egress node must respond to the match for tracking,
       following procedures specified in other documents for the case
       where LIR is set."

[SLI] Please state the relevant document references here.






Section 5.2



"Note that, per RFC4364, every RD begins with a two-octet type field
   that is either 0, 1, or 2.  By adding 16 to the second octet of the
   RD, we force the type field to be 16, 17, or 18. "

[SLI] It works but we may need to ensure that the types > 16 cannot be used=
 anymore by new applications. Moreover if new RD types are created, new sib=
lings will have to be created.
Wouldn't it be easier to set the MSB of the RD type to 1 ? so we only lock =
half of the type space.
Or what could be the impact of using the RD of the local VRF of the egress =
node ?

Section 5.3


"In the case where the egress
   node is not a PE, but rather an ABR or ASBR, it will not know whether
   it needs to receive a given flow unless it receives a Leaf A-D route
   whose NLRI specifies that flow and whose IP-address-specific RT
   specifies an address of the egress node."

[SLI] The sentence works but when reading it I needed multiple reread to un=
derstand that the "IP-address-specific RT
   specifies an address of the egress node." was referring to the ASBR/ABR =
and not the receiver PE.
Do you mind using "this egress node" or "this ABR/ASBR" ?


Section 8.
[SLI] Do we have counter-measures against such "attack" ? Ingress PE droppi=
ng ?



Section 9.2
I think RFC7524 needs to be referenced as normative giving that its knowled=
ge is required to understand section 5.3. I think that section 5.3 is also =
updating/complementing the procedures in RFC7524 with the "no-tunnel info" =
case.



Brgds,



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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">As shepherd of this document, please find below some=
 comments that I have:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Overall comments:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">-<span style=
=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]>Please add a section that contains all the abbrevia=
tions expansions: that may help non expert people to follow the acronyms wi=
thout looking for the first reference in the text.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">-<span style=
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nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]>I usually like figures. For the intro, it may be wo=
nderful to build a figure that reminds the existing S-PMSI/Leaf A-D procedu=
re. So without reading the text, we can remember how it works.<o:p></o:p></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">-<span style=
=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]>The interAS case may also be better with a Figure a=
nd an example (or couples of).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Introduction:<o:p></o:p></p>
<pre>&#8220;<span style=3D"color:black">By originating one of these BGP rou=
tes, an ingress node advertises that<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; it is transmitting a particular m=
ulticast flow.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">[SLI] Is &#8220;is transmitting&#8221; correct ? Can=
&#8217;t we have situations where an S-PMSI route is/was advertised but no =
traffic is flowing (no yet started or switched, or stopped).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<pre>&#8220;<span style=3D"color:black">Now<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; suppose that the ingress node=
 wants explicit tracking for each<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; individual flow that it trans=
mits (following the procedures of<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; [RFC6625] on that P-tunnel.&#=
8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] Missing &#8220;)&#8221;<o:p></o:p></=
span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;This allows the<o:p></o:p></span></=
pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; ingress node to determine the=
 set of egress nodes that are receiving<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; flows from the ingress node.&=
#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] I think the Leaf A-D tells that ther=
e is a receiver interested by the flow, but does not tell that it actually =
receives it.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre>&#8220;<span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; Howver, this procedure=
 requires several clarifications:&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] There is a typo s/Howver/However/<o:=
p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;The procedures of [RFC6625] do not =
clearly state how to handle an<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; S-PMSI A-D =
route if its NLRI contains wild cards, but its PTA<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; specifies &=
quot;no tunnel info&quot;.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] I quickly ran over RFC6625, it does =
not mention anything on explicit tracking or Leaf A-D routes. So we assume =
that RFC6513/6514 only applies here.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220; &nbsp;&nbsp;*&nbsp; The explicit t=
racking procedures do not allow an ingress node<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp; to &quot;see&quot; past the boundaries of the segmentation domain.<o=
:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp; This particular problem is not further addressed in this<o:p></o:p><=
/span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp; revision of this document.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] Do you plan to address it ? Or do we=
 now consider it as out of scope ?<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">Section 2:<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;Prior specifications define one fla=
g in the PTA, the &quot;Leaf Info<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; Required&quot; (LIR) flag, th=
at is used for explicit tracking.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] Please point to the right reference<=
o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;If the LIR-pF flag is set in a give=
n PTA, the LIR flag of that PTA<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; SHOULD also be set.&#8221;<o:=
p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] Why not using a MUST ?<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;one forces a<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; a response to be sent an egre=
ss node that does not support LIR-pF&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] Is there a missing word like &#8216;=
sent by an egress node&#8221; ?<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"> <o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Section 3:<o:p></o:p></p>
<pre>&#8220;<span style=3D"color:black">The definition of &quot;match for r=
eception&quot; in [RFC6625] is hereby<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; modified as follows:&#8221;<o=
:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] Please point to the section that you=
 are updating.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">In addition, section 3.2 of RFC6625 contai=
ns multiple if then else conditions for each cases (C-S,C-G) and (C-*,C-G).=
 Please give some precision in where do you want to insert your new stateme=
nt in this processing sequence. I guess it is at the beginning.<o:p></o:p><=
/span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre>&#8220;W<span style=3D"color:black">hen finding the &quot;match for re=
ception&quot; for a given (C-S,C-G) or<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (C-*,C-G), =
ignore any S-PMSI A-D route that has no PTA, or whose<o:p></o:p></span></pr=
e>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; PTA specify=
ing &quot;no tunnel information&quot;.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">[SLI] I would be in favor to introduce a normative s=
tatement here.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<pre>&#8220;<span style=3D"color:black">We also introduce a new notion: the=
 &quot;match for tracking&quot;.&nbsp; This<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; differs from the &quot;match =
for reception&quot; as follows:&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] It would be better to give a definit=
ion of the &#8220;match for tracking&#8221; before giving the rules. Here y=
ou&#8217;re explaining only the rules, not the difference in the meaning. W=
ouldn&#8217;t it be easier to tell that the implementation MUST consider on=
ly the S-PMSI A-D routes that have a LIR flag and/or LR-pF flag set and the=
n run the same rules as the RFC6625. Why do you want to have S-PMSI routes =
with PTA and LIR unset in your route list for &#8220;match for tracking&#82=
21; ? You need to take care here on your text proposal as one of your previ=
ous statement updates the RFC6625 and the match reception procedure, so the=
 rules to be applied are the original one from RFC6625 and not the updated =
one.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;&nbsp;&nbsp; Also note that if a ma=
tch for tracking does not have the LIR flag or<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; the LIR-pF flag set, no expli=
cit tracking information will be<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; generated.&nbsp; See Section =
5.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] Again I do not see the value added o=
f keeping such route as a match for tracking as there is no tracking reques=
ted.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">Section 4:<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;Such a route could be an<o:p></o:p>=
</span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I-PMS=
I A-D route, a (C-*,C-G1) S-PMSI A-D route, a (C-S1,C-*)<o:p></o:p></span><=
/pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; S-PMS=
I A-D route, or a (C-*,C-*) S-PMSI A-D route. &#8220;<o:p></o:p></span></pr=
e>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">[SLI] Is per flow explicit tracking also r=
equired for I-PMSI ? I do not see it listed in the goals of the doc ? The g=
oal was to address wildcards S-PMSI AD routes.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;Further, if the ingress node origin=
ates a wildcard S-PMSI A-D<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; route car=
rying a PTA specifying the tunnel to be used for<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; carrying =
(C-S1,C-G1) traffic, and if that PTA has the LIR-pF bit<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; set, then=
 explicit tracking for (C-S1,C-G1) is requested by that<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; S-PMSI A-=
D route.&nbsp; Thus the ingress node SHOULD NOT originate a<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (C-S1,C-G=
1) S-PMSI A-D route whose PTA specifies &quot;no tunnel<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; info&quot=
;; such a route would not provide any additional<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; functiona=
lity.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">[SLI] I do not fully understand this text in t=
he context of your procedure 1. which deals with an origination of an (C-S1=
,C-G1) S-PMSI A-D route (no wildcard). As I understand
 the procedure for the wildcard is defined in 2.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&#8220;2. The following procedure can be used =
if (and only if) it is known<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; that the =
egress nodes support the optional LIR-pF flag.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">I have some issue with this sentence. It d=
oes not seem to be normative as there is no normative statement. However I =
understand it as a critical thing (&#8220;and only if&#8221; !) so it may r=
equire at least a SHOULD.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">Then the issue I see is that this knowledg=
e does not come from the protocol, so it sounds important to me to highligh=
t the impact of a mistake.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">BUT, reading the section 5. I understand t=
hat it is not as critical as it seems as the receiver will ignore simply th=
e LIR-pF flag and apply the standard procedure (LIR set).<o:p></o:p></span>=
</pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">Please clarify the criticity to have or no=
t this knowledge.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
; To terminate explicit tracking that has been initiated by an<o:p></o:p></=
span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; S-PMSI A-=
D route whose PTA specifies a tunnel, the ingress node<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; re-origin=
ates the route without the LIR flag set&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">[SLI] Do we also need to clear the LIR-pf ? It=
 would make sense to do so.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;If the match for tracking has LIR s=
et and if either (a) the<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; egress no=
de does not support LIR-pF, or (b) LIR-pF is not set,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; then the =
egress node must respond to the match for tracking,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; following=
 procedures specified in other documents for the case<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; where LIR=
 is set.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">[SLI] Please state the relevant document refer=
ences here.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Section 5.2<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;Note that, per RFC4364, every RD be=
gins with a two-octet type field<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; that is either 0, 1, or 2.&nbsp; =
By adding 16 to the second octet of the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; RD, we force the type field to be=
 16, 17, or 18. &#8220;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">[SLI] It works but we may need to ensure that =
the types &gt; 16 cannot be used anymore by new applications. Moreover if n=
ew RD types are created, new siblings will have to
 be created.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">Wouldn&#8217;t it be easier to set the MSB of =
the RD type to 1 ? so we only lock half of the type space.<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">Or what could be the impact of using the RD of=
 the local VRF of the egress node ?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">Section 5.3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span style=3D"color:black">&#8220;In the case where the egress<o:p></=
o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; node is not a PE, but rather an A=
BR or ASBR, it will not know whether<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; it needs to receive a given flow =
unless it receives a Leaf A-D route<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; whose NLRI specifies that flow an=
d whose IP-address-specific RT<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; specifies an address of the egres=
s node.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">[SLI] The sentence works but when reading it I=
 needed multiple reread to understand that the &#8220;IP-address-specific R=
T<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; specifies an address of the egres=
s node.&#8221; was referring to the ASBR/ABR and not the receiver PE.<o:p><=
/o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">Do you mind using &#8220;this egress node&#822=
1; or &#8220;this ABR/ASBR&#8221; ?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">Section 8.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black">[SLI] Do we have counter-measures against such=
 &#8220;attack&#8221; ? Ingress PE dropping ?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Section 9.2<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I think RFC7524 needs to be referenced as normative =
giving that its knowledge is required to understand section 5.3. I think th=
at section 5.3 is also updating/complementing the procedures in RFC7524 wit=
h the &#8220;no-tunnel info&#8221; case.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Brgds,<o:p></o:p></p>
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