[bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-mib-10

David Schinazi <dschinazi@apple.com> Thu, 06 September 2018 22:15 UTC

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Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-mib-10
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2018-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-03
IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-13

Summary: This document is clearly written and looks ready to me.

Major issues: None found.

Minor issues: None found. 

Nits/editorial comments: Typo "senstive" - please run the internet draft spellchecker tool.