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Re: [bess] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Tue, 22 January 2019 16:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [bess] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: (with COMMENT)
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That all sounds good, thanks!

Ben.

> On Jan 22, 2019, at 2:59 AM, Ali Sajassi (sajassi) <sajassi@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
> Ben,
> Thanks for your review and your comments. Please refer to my replies below marked with "AS>".
> 
> On 1/9/19, 1:28 PM, "Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com <mailto:ben@nostrum.com>> wrote:
> 
>    Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
>    draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05: No Objection
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> 
>    ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>    COMMENT:
>    ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
>    Thanks for the work on this.
> 
>    I support Alissa's discuss.
> 
>    §2:
>    - The 2119/8174 keywords in this section are not used according to the RFC
>    2119/RFC 8174 definitions. The RFCs talk about requirements on implementations
>    to achieve interoperability. This speaks of requirements for the standards
>    process. If the working group prefers to keep the use of keywords in this
>    section, please add some additional text to the 2119/8174 boilerplate to
>    explain the usage. (My other comments on the section assume that the normative
>    keywords will remain.)
> 
>    - Req 2:  "The solution MUST require no changes..."
>    I suggest "MUST NOT require changes"
> 
> AS> Changed it to: "must not require any changes to ..."
> 
>    - Req 5: This doesn't seem to state a solution requirement; rather, it
>    describes an action that VPN instances may take. Is the solution requirement to
>    allow this behavior?
> 
> AS>   moved the 2nd part of the paragraph to the solution description under sections 3.2 and 4.2.
> 
> Regards,
> Ali

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