Re: [bfcpbis] Misplaced text in draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4582bis-03

Works for me.

Cheers,
Charles

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> From: bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org] On
> Behalf Of Tom Kristensen (tomkrist)
> Sent: Tuesday, June 26, 2012 5:22 AM
> To: Horvath, Ernst
> Cc: bfcpbis@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] Misplaced text in draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4582bis-03
> 
> The changes you propose below seems to make sense and will keep the
> logic partitioning of the text with regards to requirements/behaviour
> for the different roles in the separate sections:
> 
> 10.  Floor Participant Operations
> 11.  Chair Operations
> 12.  General Client Operations
> 13.  Floor Control Server Operations
> 
> I no objections are received, I'll proceed to shuffle the text across
> according to your comments; thank you very much!
> 
> -- Tom
> 
> On 06/25/2012 05:34 PM, Horvath, Ernst wrote:
> > I think some text needs to be shifted into a different section, as detailed
> below.
> >
> > Sections 10.1.2 and 10.2.2 both start with a sentence
> >    "When communicating over unreliable transport and upon receiving a
> >     [FloorRequest/FloorRelease] from a participant, the floor control server
> MUST
> >     respond with a FloorRequestStatus message within the transaction
> >     failure window to complete the transaction."
> > These statements put a normative requirement on the floor control server
> and should therefore go into section 13.1 and 13.4, respectively.
> >
> > Similarly, the sentence
> >    "When communicating over unreliable transport and upon receiving a
> >     ChairAction from a participant, the floor control server MUST respond
> >     with a ChairActionAck message within the transaction failure window
> >     to complete the transaction."
> > from 11.2 belongs into section 13.6. In addition, "from a participant"
> should rather be "from a chair" in that sentence.
> >
> > The same applies to
> > - 12.1.2, where the 1st sentence should go into 13.5;
> > - 12.2.2, where the 1st sentence should go into 13.2;
> > - 12.3.2, where the 1st sentence should go into 13.3;
> > - 12.4.2, where the 1st sentence should go into 13.7.
> >
> > Furthermore, section 13.1.3 specifies participant behaviour and should be
> moved into section 10.1, possibly under the heading "Reception of a
> Subsequent FloorRequestStatus Message".
> > What could be covered in 13.1.3 (or as part of 13.1.2) instead is
> retransmission of a subsequent FloorRequestStatus message, which is
> currently not specified explicitly.
> >
> > Simlarly for 13.5.3, which should go into 12.1; retransmission of
> subsequent FloorStatus messages could be covered in 13.5.3 instead.
> >
> > 13.9 is also in the wrong section, but this subsection will disappear anyway
> if ErrorAck is removed as a whole.
> >
> > Regards,
> > Ernst
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