Re: [bfcpbis] Draft new version: draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-25

"Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com> Wed, 26 September 2018 11:01 UTC

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From: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] Draft new version: draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-25
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As an individual, some editorial comments/typos.

Section 4, use of TCP/TLS/BFCP:
s/backward interoperability/backward interoperable

Section 4, use of TCP/DTLS/BFCP:
s/in [RFC4571]. with DTLS/in [RFC4571], with DTLS

Section 5.1,
OLD
An implementation compliant to this specification	
MUST NOT include the "c-s" floorctl attribute value in an offer or or	
answer, but MUST accept the attribute value in offer and process it	
as equivalent to "c-only s-only" (or "s-only c-only").  As as a	
result, each endpoint will take the same role for each BFCP-	
controlled media stream assocaited with the BFCP stream.
NEW
An implementation compliant to this specification	
MUST NOT include the "c-s" floorctl attribute value in an offer or in	
an answer, but MUST accept the attribute value in an offer and process it	
as equivalent to "c-only s-only" (or "s-only c-only").  As a	
result, each endpoint will take the same role for each BFCP-	
controlled media stream associated with the BFCP stream.

Section 14
s/ associated with support BFCP/ associated with support of BFCP

Cheers,
Charles

-----Original Message-----
From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
Date: Wednesday, September 26, 2018 at 12:19 PM
To: "draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis.all@ietf.org>rg>, "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
Subject: Draft new version: draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-25
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Resent-To: Gonzalo Camarillo <gonzalo.camarillo@ericsson.com>om>, <tom.kristensen@tandberg.net>et>, Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>om>, Charles Eckel <eckelcu@cisco.com>om>, Keith Drage <drageke@ntlworld.com>om>, <ben@nostrum.com>om>, Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>om>, <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>fm>, Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com>
Resent-Date: Wednesday, September 26, 2018 at 12:19 PM

    Hi,
    
    I have submitted a new version (-25) of 4583bis.
    
    The new version contains the merged pull request that was created based on Adam's issues.
    
    Regards,
    
    Christer