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Re: [bfcpbis] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-04.txt

Tom Kristensen <tomkrist@cisco.com> Fri, 04 January 2013 15:21 UTC

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Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-04.txt
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Thanks. Fixed for an upcoming version.

-- Tom

On 12/27/2012 12:16 AM, Charles Eckel (eckelcu) wrote:
> The changes look good to me. I do have the following editorial suggestions:
>
> 1) Section 3
> r/transport field explained below/transport field, as explained below
> r/of transport used/of the transport used
> r/ TCP is used as transport/ TCP is used as the transport
> r/ UDP is used as transport/ UDP is used as the transport
>
> 2 Section 7
> r/ use TCP or UDP as underlying transport/ use TCP or UDP as the underlying transport
>
> Cheers,
> Charles
>
>    
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org] On
>> Behalf Of Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
>> Sent: Wednesday, December 19, 2012 2:08 PM
>> To: Tom Kristensen (tomkrist); bfcpbis@ietf.org
>> Cc: 'Tom Kristensen'
>> Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-04.txt
>>
>> Everyone who submitted WGLC comments, please confirm this version
>> addresses all your comments satisfactorily.
>> Everyone else, please review the entire draft carefully and share any
>> comment or concerns you have.
>> Thanks to Tom for incorporating all the feedback and posting this update.
>>
>> Happy Holidays!
>> Charles
>>
>>      
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org] On
>>> Behalf Of Tom Kristensen (tomkrist)
>>> Sent: Wednesday, December 19, 2012 5:45 AM
>>> To: bfcpbis@ietf.org
>>> Cc: 'Tom Kristensen'
>>> Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-04.txt
>>>
>>> On 12/19/2012 02:21 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>>        
>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>>>          
>>> directories.
>>>        
>>>>    This draft is a work item of the Binary Floor Control Protocol Bis
>>>>          
>> Working
>>      
>>> Group of the IETF.
>>>        
>>>> 	Title           : Session Description Protocol (SDP) Format for Binary
>>>>          
>>> Floor Control Protocol (BFCP) Streams
>>>        
>>>> 	Author(s)       : Gonzalo Camarillo
>>>>                             Tom Kristensen
>>>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-04.txt
>>>> 	Pages           : 15
>>>> 	Date            : 2012-12-19
>>>>
>>>>          
>>> Changes from -03:
>>> - Fixed according to Camarillo's input and comments on list 2012-10-24
>>> - Use UDP/TLS/BFCP not UDP/DTLS/BFCP in the example.
>>> - Added normative reference to RFC 5763, Section 5 also in
>>>     Section 8 Authentication.
>>> - Resolved issue with different way to pick (D)TLS initiator for TCP and
>>>     UDP, adding informational note.
>>>
>>>
>>> To my knowledge, in this draft version all the issues from WGLC and
>>> after are answered and fixed if appropriate.
>>>
>>>
>>> -- Tom
>>>
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