Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01

"Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com> Tue, 31 May 2016 22:02 UTC

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From: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>
To: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>, "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com>
Thread-Topic: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01
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Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01
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In reviewing this draft and preparing the document writeup, I came up with
a few comments (based on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-03).

1) Section 3.4, second bullet, s/ws-uri/wss-uri

2) Section 4.3, would it be more clear to replace ³depending on whether
the application is run of WS or WSS.² with ³depending on whether using
WebSocket or secure WebSocket.²?

3) Section 2, add ³NOT RECOMMENDED² to the list of key words used as
described in RFC 2119, since it is used in the draft.

Nits
4) Section 3.3, remove brackets, e.g. [Where "wss://example.com/chat" is
the wss-URI defined in Section 3
   of [RFC6455] <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6455#section-3>.]

Draft authors, please have a look at these and update the draft
accordingly.


Cheers,
Charles

On 5/9/16, 12:58 PM, "bfcpbis on behalf of Charles Eckel (eckelcu)"
<bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of eckelcu@cisco.com> wrote:

>Hi Gonzalo,
>
>Thanks to you and your co-authors. I have move the draft status to waiting
>for document writeup. I will be the document shepherd and prepare the
>writeup.
>
>Cheers,
>Charles
>
>
>
>On 5/3/16, 12:08 PM, "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com>
>wrote:
>
>>Hi Charles - 
>>
>>The draft has been updated and addresses all WGLC comments received.  It
>>is now ready for publication request.
>>
>>Cheers,
>>
>>Gonzalo
>>
>>
>>
>>> On Apr 1, 2016, at 3:06 AM, Charles Eckel (eckelcu) <eckelcu@cisco.com>
>>>wrote:
>>> 
>>> (as chair)
>>> 
>>> WGLC has ended. Thanks again to Paul for his valuable comments. I ask
>>>the authors to please share their thoughts on these and any other
>>>comments they may have received directly, and update the draft
>>>accordingly.
>>> 
>>> Cheers,
>>> Charles
>>> 
>>> From: bfcpbis <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Charles Eckel
>>><eckelcu@cisco.com>
>>> Date: Thursday, March 24, 2016 at 11:46 AM
>>> To: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
>>> Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01
>>> 
>>>> Thanks to Paul for having already reviewed and provided comments.
>>>> Everyone else, please do likewise by the March 28 deadline.
>>>> 
>>>> Cheers,
>>>> Charles
>>>> 
>>>> From: bfcpbis <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Charles Eckel
>>>><eckelcu@cisco.com>
>>>> Date: Sunday, March 13, 2016 at 9:55 AM
>>>> To: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
>>>> Subject: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01
>>>> 
>>>>> This is to announce a 2 week WGLC on the draft:
>>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01
>>>>> 
>>>>> Please review and provide any comments by Monday, March 28, 2016.
>>>>> Comments should be sent to the authors and the BFCPBIS WG list.
>>>>> If you review the draft but do not have any comments, please send a
>>>>>note to that effect as well.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> Charles
>>>>> 
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