Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01

"Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com> Wed, 01 June 2016 04:52 UTC

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From: "Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com>
To: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>, "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01
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Thanks Charles for the feedback. I will address these and publish a new
revision.

Regards,
Ram

-----Original Message-----
From: bfcpbis <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of "Charles Eckel
(eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>
Date: Wednesday, 1 June 2016 at 3:31 AM
To: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>om>, "Gonzalo Salgueiro
(gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com>
Cc: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01

>In reviewing this draft and preparing the document writeup, I came up with
>a few comments (based on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-03).
>
>1) Section 3.4, second bullet, s/ws-uri/wss-uri
>
>2) Section 4.3, would it be more clear to replace ³depending on whether
>the application is run of WS or WSS.² with ³depending on whether using
>WebSocket or secure WebSocket.²?
>
>3) Section 2, add ³NOT RECOMMENDED² to the list of key words used as
>described in RFC 2119, since it is used in the draft.
>
>Nits
>4) Section 3.3, remove brackets, e.g. [Where "wss://example.com/chat" is
>the wss-URI defined in Section 3
>   of [RFC6455] <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6455#section-3>.]
>
>Draft authors, please have a look at these and update the draft
>accordingly.
>
>
>Cheers,
>Charles
>
>On 5/9/16, 12:58 PM, "bfcpbis on behalf of Charles Eckel (eckelcu)"
><bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of eckelcu@cisco.com> wrote:
>
>>Hi Gonzalo,
>>
>>Thanks to you and your co-authors. I have move the draft status to
>>waiting
>>for document writeup. I will be the document shepherd and prepare the
>>writeup.
>>
>>Cheers,
>>Charles
>>
>>
>>
>>On 5/3/16, 12:08 PM, "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com>
>>wrote:
>>
>>>Hi Charles - 
>>>
>>>The draft has been updated and addresses all WGLC comments received.  It
>>>is now ready for publication request.
>>>
>>>Cheers,
>>>
>>>Gonzalo
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>> On Apr 1, 2016, at 3:06 AM, Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
>>>><eckelcu@cisco.com>
>>>>wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> (as chair)
>>>> 
>>>> WGLC has ended. Thanks again to Paul for his valuable comments. I ask
>>>>the authors to please share their thoughts on these and any other
>>>>comments they may have received directly, and update the draft
>>>>accordingly.
>>>> 
>>>> Cheers,
>>>> Charles
>>>> 
>>>> From: bfcpbis <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Charles Eckel
>>>><eckelcu@cisco.com>
>>>> Date: Thursday, March 24, 2016 at 11:46 AM
>>>> To: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
>>>> Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01
>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks to Paul for having already reviewed and provided comments.
>>>>> Everyone else, please do likewise by the March 28 deadline.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>> Charles
>>>>> 
>>>>> From: bfcpbis <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Charles Eckel
>>>>><eckelcu@cisco.com>
>>>>> Date: Sunday, March 13, 2016 at 9:55 AM
>>>>> To: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
>>>>> Subject: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01
>>>>> 
>>>>>> This is to announce a 2 week WGLC on the draft:
>>>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please review and provide any comments by Monday, March 28, 2016.
>>>>>> Comments should be sent to the authors and the BFCPBIS WG list.
>>>>>> If you review the draft but do not have any comments, please send a
>>>>>>note to that effect as well.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>> Charles
>>>>>> 
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