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Re: [bfcpbis] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: (with COMMENT)

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Wed, 24 October 2018 10:02 UTC

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From: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
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Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Charles,

> On 23 Oct 2018, at 18:56, Charles Eckel (eckelcu) <eckelcu@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Alexey,
> 
> Thank you for your review and comments.
> The maximum value for each of these is determined by the COMMON-HEADER format in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4582bis-16#section-5.1.

I think adding a cross reference would help readers/implementors.

Best Regards,
Alexey

> Cheers,
> Charles
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
> Date: Tuesday, October 23, 2018 at 3:44 PM
> To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: "draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis@ietf.org>, "bfcpbis-chairs@ietf.org" <bfcpbis-chairs@ietf.org>, Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com>, "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
> Subject: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: (with COMMENT)
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>    Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
>    draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: No Objection
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>    ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>    COMMENT:
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> 
>    I have one small issue with this document which applies to several sections:
> 
>    5.2.  SDP 'confid' Attributes
> 
>           The Augmented BNF syntax [RFC5234] for the attribute is:
> 
>             conference-id = 1*DIGIT
> 
>    Is there any limit on the maximum allowed value of this attribute?
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> 
>    The same issue in all the following sections where "1*DIGIT" construct is used:
> 
>    5.3.  SDP 'userid' Attribute
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>    5.4.  SDP 'floorid' Attribute
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>    5.5.  SDP 'bfcpver' Attribute
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