Re: [bfcpbis] IESG AD reviews of draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: The Pull Request

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Mon, 03 December 2018 15:57 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] IESG AD reviews of draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: The Pull Request
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Correct e-mail address for Pete.

On 03/12/2018, 17.51, "Christer Holmberg" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:

    Hi,
    
    The fourth commit includes additional changes based on Benjamin's and Ekr's reviews, and changes based on Pete's gen-art review.
    
    https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-bfcp-4583bis/pull/13
    
    At this point I do NOT intend to make further changes based on the IESG review, so please take a look and let me know whether I have forgotten something, or whether I did something wrong.
    
    Regards,
    
    Christer
    
    Ps. Ekr, I got rid of most of the "associated" terminology from the O/A section. There is still some, but the text now talks about "including attributes in m sections", similar to BUNDLE.
    
    
    
    
    On 03/12/2018, 9.53, "bfcpbis on behalf of Christer Holmberg" <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
    
        Hi,
        
        The third commit includes changes based on Benjamin's and Ekr's reviews.
        
        Regards,
        
        Christer
        
        On 02/12/2018, 13.34, "bfcpbis on behalf of Christer Holmberg" <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
        
            Hi,
            
            The second commit includes changes (all but the one related to the MUX category) based on Ben's review.
            
            Regards,
            
            Christer
            
            
            
            On 02/12/2018, 13.32, "Christer Holmberg" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
            
                Hi,
                
                I have created a pull request that will include the changes based on the AD reviews.
                
                The first commit includes changes based on Alexey's review.
                
                https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-bfcp-4583bis/pull/13
                
                Regards,
                
                Christer
                
                 
                
                
            
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