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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>, Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>, Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com>
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Hi,

The fourth commit includes additional changes based on Benjamin's and Ekr's reviews, and changes based on Pete's gen-art review.

https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-bfcp-4583bis/pull/13

At this point I do NOT intend to make further changes based on the IESG review, so please take a look and let me know whether I have forgotten something, or whether I did something wrong.

Regards,

Christer

Ps. Ekr, I got rid of most of the "associated" terminology from the O/A section. There is still some, but the text now talks about "including attributes in m sections", similar to BUNDLE.




On 03/12/2018, 9.53, "bfcpbis on behalf of Christer Holmberg" <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:

    Hi,
    
    The third commit includes changes based on Benjamin's and Ekr's reviews.
    
    Regards,
    
    Christer
    
    On 02/12/2018, 13.34, "bfcpbis on behalf of Christer Holmberg" <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
    
        Hi,
        
        The second commit includes changes (all but the one related to the MUX category) based on Ben's review.
        
        Regards,
        
        Christer
        
        
        
        On 02/12/2018, 13.32, "Christer Holmberg" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
        
            Hi,
            
            I have created a pull request that will include the changes based on the AD reviews.
            
            The first commit includes changes based on Alexey's review.
            
            https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-bfcp-4583bis/pull/13
            
            Regards,
            
            Christer
            
             
            
            
        
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