Re: [bfcpbis] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: (with COMMENT)

"Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com> Thu, 25 October 2018 08:11 UTC

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From: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>
To: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
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Thread-Topic: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: (with COMMENT)
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I agree, that is a good suggestion. Thanks!

Charles

-----Original Message-----
From: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
Date: Wednesday, October 24, 2018 at 11:02 AM
To: Charles Eckel <eckelcu@cisco.com>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis@ietf.org>, "bfcpbis-chairs@ietf.org" <bfcpbis-chairs@ietf.org>, Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com>, "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: (with COMMENT)
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Resent-Date: Wednesday, October 24, 2018 at 11:02 AM

    Hi Charles,
    
    > On 23 Oct 2018, at 18:56, Charles Eckel (eckelcu) <eckelcu@cisco.com> wrote:
    > 
    > Hi Alexey,
    > 
    > Thank you for your review and comments.
    > The maximum value for each of these is determined by the COMMON-HEADER format in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4582bis-16#section-5.1.
    
    I think adding a cross reference would help readers/implementors.
    
    Best Regards,
    Alexey
    
    > Cheers,
    > Charles
    > 
    > -----Original Message-----
    > From: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
    > Date: Tuesday, October 23, 2018 at 3:44 PM
    > To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
    > Cc: "draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis@ietf.org>, "bfcpbis-chairs@ietf.org" <bfcpbis-chairs@ietf.org>, Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com>, "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
    > Subject: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: (with COMMENT)
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    > Resent-To: Charles Eckel <eckelcu@cisco.com>, Keith Drage <drageke@ntlworld.com>
    > Resent-Date: Tuesday, October 23, 2018 at 3:44 PM
    > 
    >    Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
    >    draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: No Objection
    > 
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    >    The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
    >    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis/
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    > 
    > 
    >    ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    >    COMMENT:
    >    ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    > 
    >    I have one small issue with this document which applies to several sections:
    > 
    >    5.2.  SDP 'confid' Attributes
    > 
    >           The Augmented BNF syntax [RFC5234] for the attribute is:
    > 
    >             conference-id = 1*DIGIT
    > 
    >    Is there any limit on the maximum allowed value of this attribute?
    > 
    > 
    >    The same issue in all the following sections where "1*DIGIT" construct is used:
    > 
    >    5.3.  SDP 'userid' Attribute
    > 
    >    5.4.  SDP 'floorid' Attribute
    > 
    >    5.5.  SDP 'bfcpver' Attribute
    > 
    > 
    > 
    >