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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>, "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
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Hi,

>>>     * General comment:
>>>     
>>>     I have a slight preference for doing references to rules defined in
>>>     other documents differently. E.g.:
>>>     
>>>         DIGIT = <DIGIT defined in [RFC5234]>
>>>     
>>>     rather than:
>>>     
>>>         ;DIGIT is defined in [RFC5234]
>>>     
>>>     The advantage is that when mechanically verifying the SDP, the comment
>>>     form results in an undefined symbol while the <> form doesn't. (No, I
>>>     didn't mechanically verify the SDP this time.)
>>    
>> Will fix as suggested. I did get some xml2rfc problems with the '<' and '>' characters, though, so for now I did:
>>   
>>    DIGIT = DIGIT defined in [RFC5234]
>
> The <> is explicit abnf syntax, and is the important part.
> You can fix this using &lt &gt, or using <![CDATA[...]]>.
>
> Personally I always use CDATA for abnf.

Fixed, and pull request updated.

Regards,

Christer

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