[bfcpbis] Misplaced text in draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4582bis-03

["Horvath, Ernst" <[e-mail]>]

I think some text needs to be shifted into a different section, as detailed below.

Sections 10.1.2 and 10.2.2 both start with a sentence
  "When communicating over unreliable transport and upon receiving a
   [FloorRequest/FloorRelease] from a participant, the floor control server MUST
   respond with a FloorRequestStatus message within the transaction
   failure window to complete the transaction."
These statements put a normative requirement on the floor control server and should therefore go into section 13.1 and 13.4, respectively.

Similarly, the sentence
  "When communicating over unreliable transport and upon receiving a
   ChairAction from a participant, the floor control server MUST respond
   with a ChairActionAck message within the transaction failure window
   to complete the transaction."
from 11.2 belongs into section 13.6. In addition, "from a participant" should rather be "from a chair" in that sentence.

The same applies to
- 12.1.2, where the 1st sentence should go into 13.5;
- 12.2.2, where the 1st sentence should go into 13.2;
- 12.3.2, where the 1st sentence should go into 13.3;
- 12.4.2, where the 1st sentence should go into 13.7.

Furthermore, section 13.1.3 specifies participant behaviour and should be moved into section 10.1, possibly under the heading "Reception of a Subsequent FloorRequestStatus Message".
What could be covered in 13.1.3 (or as part of 13.1.2) instead is retransmission of a subsequent FloorRequestStatus message, which is currently not specified explicitly.

Simlarly for 13.5.3, which should go into 12.1; retransmission of subsequent FloorStatus messages could be covered in 13.5.3 instead.

13.9 is also in the wrong section, but this subsection will disappear anyway if ErrorAck is removed as a whole.

Regards,
Ernst