Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06
"Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com> Wed, 01 June 2016 04:51 UTC
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From: "Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com>
To: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>, "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com>, "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06
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Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06
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Hi Charles, Thanks for your feedback. See inline -----Original Message----- From: bfcpbis <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com> Date: Wednesday, 1 June 2016 at 3:01 AM To: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>, "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com> Cc: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06 >I preparing the document writeup, I came up with a few comments (based on >draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-07): > >1) Section 4.1, Sec-WebSocket-Protocol >The example offers indicates the sub protocol as ³bfcp² >The example answer indicates the sub protocol as ³BFCP² >Was this done on purpose to call attention to the field being case >insensitive? Tracing back through RFC 6455 and RFC 2616, I believe this >field is in fact case insensitive, but would it be helpful to clarify that >directly in this draft? During WGLC reviews Paul suggested to use “BFCP”. I will change to that way in the entire draft. > >2) Section 6.3, the formatting of this section suffers from the way >references were made. It currently reads as follows: > >The SDP attribute 'ws-uri' defined in Section 3.1 > of [Section 3.2 ><https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-07#ref-I-D. >i >etf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri> of [I-D.ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri] MUST be used when >BFCP runs on top of WSS">I-D.ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri] MUST be used when >BFCP runs on top > of WS, which in turn runs on top of TCP. The SDP attribute 'wss-uri' > defined in Section 3.2 of [Section 3.2 ><https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-07#ref-I-D. >i >etf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri> of [I-D.ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri] MUST be used when >BFCP runs on top of WSS">I-D.ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri] MUST be used > when BFCP runs on top of WSS, which in turn runs on top of TLS and > TCP. > > >I expect this was meant to be as follows: > >The SDP attribute 'ws-uri' defined in Section 3.1 > of [I-D.ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri] MUST be used when BFCP runs on top > of WS, which in turn runs on top of TCP. The SDP attribute 'wss-uri' > defined in Section 3.2 of [I-D.ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri] MUST be used > when BFCP runs on top of WSS, which in turn runs on top of TLS and > TCP. Suggested text looks good to me. I will fix it > > >3) Section 7.1 suffers a similar reference formatting issue as section >6.3. Will fix > >4) Section 12.2, RFC 2818 is indicated as a reference, but it is not >references from within the draft. Will remove as its not being referenced > >Nits >5) ³.² missing at end of first and second paragraphs in section 5 and at >end of first paragraph in section 6.1 and in section 6.2. >6) Section 6.3, s/a new SDP attributes/a new SDP attribute >7) Section 7.1, s/whichcould/which could >8) Section 7.2, s/a endpoint/an endpoint >9) Section 10.2, s/RFC&rfc.number/RFCXXXX (two instances) Thanks will fix these. I will publish a revision soon. Regards, Ram > >Please have a look at these and update the draft accordingly. > >Cheers, >Charles > > > >On 5/9/16, 12:58 PM, "bfcpbis on behalf of Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" ><bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of eckelcu@cisco.com> wrote: > >>Hi Gonzalo, >> >>Thanks to you and your co-authors. I have move the draft status to >>waiting >>for document writeup. I will be the document shepherd and prepare the >>writeup. >> >>Cheers, >>Charles >> >> >>On 5/3/16, 12:09 PM, "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com> >>wrote: >> >>>Hi Charles - >>> >>>The draft has been updated and addresses all WGLC comments received. It >>>is now ready for publication request. >>> >>>Cheers, >>> >>>Gonzalo >>> >>> >>>> On Apr 1, 2016, at 3:07 AM, Charles Eckel (eckelcu) >>>><eckelcu@cisco.com> >>>>wrote: >>>> >>>> (as chair) >>>> >>>> WGLC has ended. Thanks again to Paul for his valuable comments. I ask >>>>the authors to please share their thoughts on these and any other >>>>comments they may have received directly, and update the draft >>>>accordingly. >>>> >>>> Cheers, >>>> Charles >>>> >>>> From: bfcpbis <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Charles Eckel >>>><eckelcu@cisco.com> >>>> Date: Thursday, March 24, 2016 at 11:46 AM >>>> To: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org> >>>> Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06 >>>> >>>>> Thanks to Paul for having already reviewed and provided comments. >>>>> Everyone else, please do likewise by the March 28 deadline. >>>>> >>>>> Cheers, >>>>> Charles >>>>> >>>>> From: bfcpbis <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Charles Eckel >>>>><eckelcu@cisco.com> >>>>> Date: Sunday, March 13, 2016 at 9:55 AM >>>>> To: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org> >>>>> Subject: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06 >>>>> >>>>>> This is to announce a 2 week WGLC on the draft: >>>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06 >>>>>> >>>>>> Please review and provide any comments by Monday, March 28, 2016. >>>>>> Comments should be sent to the authors and the BFCPBIS WG list. >>>>>> If you review the draft but do not have any comments, please send a >>>>>>note to that effect as well. >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks, >>>>>> Charles >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> bfcpbis mailing list >>>> bfcpbis@ietf.org >>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bfcpbis >>> >> >>_______________________________________________ >>bfcpbis mailing list >>bfcpbis@ietf.org >>https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bfcpbis > >_______________________________________________ >bfcpbis mailing list >bfcpbis@ietf.org >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bfcpbis
- [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websock… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)